[Hivemind] - Barbaric yauping!

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Aside from a little fluff detailing the bards who make the music boxes, one new item, and the auction rules the dc has not changed much.

Emerald KNight, would you like to look at it in its draft form?
 

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Hey EK I am off in a few minutes but if you do get a chance to read the little rtf I sent you I would love the feedback so I can work on it more while doing other things tomorrow.

(its 686 words or thereabouts.)

I have a few more ideas like a monster or two (A Steam Driven Juggernaut, and a Clockwork Prowler
 

Skade said:
Aside from a little fluff detailing the bards who make the music boxes, one new item, and the auction rules the dc has not changed much.

Emerald KNight, would you like to look at it in its draft form?

I would :D
 


Undfind and Maldur its on the way.

Damn, I forgot to add your walking staff, maldur. I'll be sure to get in the next version. Sorry....
 
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BTW my co contributors, right now we are at 4,885 words.

Not too bad. :D


Edit: Ok, I'm headed to bed. If EK shows again, and he wants to check it out, would one of you email it to him?
 
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Skade said:
Undfind and Maldur its on the way.

Damn, I forgot to add your walking staff, maldur. I'll be sure to get in the next version. Sorry....

@#@$#@$@

Im very curious what DG, H and EK will think of it :)

I kinda like it so far, it need some polishing but we are getting there!
 

Maldur said:


@#@$#@$@

Im very curious what DG, H and EK will think of it :)

I kinda like it so far, it need some polishing but we are getting there!

I'll send some RNMs to torture me for my indescretion.

Kinda? *sniffle* We'll get there, the prose right now is functional, I just need to make it a little more literary. If that is the problem. Email me with what you think should be polished.
 



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