Homebrew Alchemist archetype.

[Lastoutkast]

I wanted to make a Witch Doctor/Shaman like class and
I felt the alchemist was the best way to do it. This build is simply a rearrangement
of other archetypes. My focus is on RP rather than OP so please
Feel free to tell me what you think and would you alow this build
to play on your table.
Thanks all.

 

[gamerprinter]

Well usually when people start a thread about creating a custom archetype, they actually post a first version even if it needs work. Just saying you want to create an archetype using X and Y used for Z class, doesn't give anyone much to work with. We don't know which class features fit your concept (for that matter, I can't even see what your concept is...)

Also how in the heck is an alchemist the ideal class to build a concept based on a Witch Doctor/Shaman - that doesn't even make sense! Not that it wouldn't work, but since you haven't explained what your goal is, or what you want this character to do, these generalizations of one or two classes to build a whole different class doesn't help anyone.

Forget about what classes you're basing this concept on, tell us what you want this character to be able to do.