Counterpoint: the original trilogy had three different directors.
How would you change the new Star Wars trilogy
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Zardnaar
Legend
But only one person doing the plot. George had advice though.
That’s not the premise of this thread. You get to mildly edit, not remake.
DWChancellor
Kobold Enthusiast
Hmm. That "keep it simple" part is really tough. Mostly re-edit to remove the character bloat? Subtract a few (pick one: Finn subplots, Poe-subplots) and you improve both the later movies.
RangerWickett
Legend
My goal is that by the end of the trilogy, Ben gets to be a swaggering son of Solo, and Rey gets to be a heroic inspiration to a new generation of Force users.
This might be a wild change, but redeem Kylo Ren at the end of episode VIII.
Changes to TFA
Short version - A bunch of small tweaks to set up Kylo's double agent role.
Changes to TLJ
Short version - Leia dies when her ship is attacked, and so after killing Snoke, Ben is actually persuaded by Rey to renounce the Dark Side. He reveals that this whole time he'd been trying to get closer to Snoke, because there was some dark secret he wasn't ever willing to share.
Changes to TRoS
Short version - We explicitly have the characters contacting spirits from the past, which is why they're traveling all over, instead of just following clue A to clue B to clue C.
This might be a wild change, but redeem Kylo Ren at the end of episode VIII.
The First Order - After RotJ, they started as an imperial remnant that withdrew to the Uncharted Region and allied with Snoke, a Dark Side user from the planet Ren, who was head of a cult that served Palpatine. The First Order is not a 'new empire,' though. Rather, they have a base of operations, and then recruit people from around the galaxy with offers of power, and are methodically overthrowing planets by trying to foil efforts of the New Republic to keep the peace, and in turn claim that only the First Order can restore the security that the empire provided. In a way, they're a bit like the Islamic State.
Also, they've been gradually kidnapping and brainwashing children to be their soldiers, and those who are found to be force sensitive are trained to be the Knights of Ren.
Ben's Backstory - Luke tried to train some new Jedi, Snoke manipulates Ben Solo, and the Knights of Ren came and destroyed the temple. (Ben should've been a young teen at this point - this would've been maybe 15 years before TFA).
Ben knows that when he leaves, Luke will come follow, and that Snoke intends to kill Luke. So Ben hacks Luke's X-Wing to take him to some random planet and strand him there. Snoke sees this as a mark of weakness, and wants to find and kill Skywalker, but Ben honestly doesn't know where he sent Luke. He just let the Force be his guide.
Ben joins the Knights of Ren, and adopts the name Kylo Ren. He's the strongest Force-sensitive in the group, and travels to Endor to recover his grandfather's khyber crystal from his funeral pyre. There he had a vision (which we'll only learn of later), seeing the Force spirit of Anakin Skywalker. Anakin warned him that Snoke is but a minion of the Sith, and that he can sense the spirit of the emperor still persists. It is gathering power to be reborn. Snoke never reveals where his master is, so Ben decides to embrace the Dark Side, to earn Snoke's trust, and then to finish what Anakin started: the defeat of the Sith.
Rey's Backstory - Her parents were no one famous, true. However, they're not scum. The First Order came to Jakku about fifteen years ago. Rey's dad had been a Rebel pilot, and his mother a Rebel spy, who after the Empire fell, Luke realized were both Force sensitive and offered to teach them. But they declined, wanting instead to return home and raise a family. After Luke was exiled, the First Order tracked them down. Afraid for their daughter, and with few options in an emergency, they sold her Unkar Plutt, moments before they were captured and carried away.
Han and Leia Backstory - Their relationship fell apart after Ben disappeared. They hadn't heard about him for years after he joined Snoke, and while 'Kylo Ren' has become infamous, they only just realize that it's him during TFA.
Leia has been trying to warn the New Republic about the First Order. At the start of TFA, there's not any coordinated Resistance yet.
Han and Chewie aren't smugglers; they're on a mission to stop this ship of monsters from being taken to some villain or other, but they detoured when they detected the Falcon.
Finn and Poe and Rose don't need any changes.
Also, they've been gradually kidnapping and brainwashing children to be their soldiers, and those who are found to be force sensitive are trained to be the Knights of Ren.
Ben's Backstory - Luke tried to train some new Jedi, Snoke manipulates Ben Solo, and the Knights of Ren came and destroyed the temple. (Ben should've been a young teen at this point - this would've been maybe 15 years before TFA).
Ben knows that when he leaves, Luke will come follow, and that Snoke intends to kill Luke. So Ben hacks Luke's X-Wing to take him to some random planet and strand him there. Snoke sees this as a mark of weakness, and wants to find and kill Skywalker, but Ben honestly doesn't know where he sent Luke. He just let the Force be his guide.
Ben joins the Knights of Ren, and adopts the name Kylo Ren. He's the strongest Force-sensitive in the group, and travels to Endor to recover his grandfather's khyber crystal from his funeral pyre. There he had a vision (which we'll only learn of later), seeing the Force spirit of Anakin Skywalker. Anakin warned him that Snoke is but a minion of the Sith, and that he can sense the spirit of the emperor still persists. It is gathering power to be reborn. Snoke never reveals where his master is, so Ben decides to embrace the Dark Side, to earn Snoke's trust, and then to finish what Anakin started: the defeat of the Sith.
Rey's Backstory - Her parents were no one famous, true. However, they're not scum. The First Order came to Jakku about fifteen years ago. Rey's dad had been a Rebel pilot, and his mother a Rebel spy, who after the Empire fell, Luke realized were both Force sensitive and offered to teach them. But they declined, wanting instead to return home and raise a family. After Luke was exiled, the First Order tracked them down. Afraid for their daughter, and with few options in an emergency, they sold her Unkar Plutt, moments before they were captured and carried away.
Han and Leia Backstory - Their relationship fell apart after Ben disappeared. They hadn't heard about him for years after he joined Snoke, and while 'Kylo Ren' has become infamous, they only just realize that it's him during TFA.
Leia has been trying to warn the New Republic about the First Order. At the start of TFA, there's not any coordinated Resistance yet.
Han and Chewie aren't smugglers; they're on a mission to stop this ship of monsters from being taken to some villain or other, but they detoured when they detected the Falcon.
Finn and Poe and Rose don't need any changes.
Changes to TFA
Short version - A bunch of small tweaks to set up Kylo's double agent role.
Poe's on Jakku because Lor San Tekka was once a member of Palpatine's cult, and he has a map to the First Order's remote base. Nobody's looking for Luke. Poe doesn't get the map, Kylo does.
Instead of Starkiller Base being a doomsday weapon, Starkiller Gate is some ancient technology, that lets the First Order fleet bypass the treacherous space around the Uncharted Regions. The Gate consumes a star as a fuel source for each time it opens a portal. The Gate is so old that it actually has its own biosphere.
As in the real Ep 7, Poe's captured and tortured, Finn breaks him out, the ship crashes, Finn meets up with Rey, they steal the Falcon to escape, link up with Han and Chewie, get to Maz's tavern, Rey has a weird vision.
Kylo senses this weird vision. This will be our first moment of the two of them seeing each other through the Force link. It's very brief.
The First Order's fleet comes into orbit above a world; let's call it Hosnian. General Hux gives his fascist speech. He warns that the gate will consume their star if they do not immediately join the First Order. They must either die in darkness or join the darkness. (Give Hux a bodyguard from among the Knights of Ren, just to give them a bit more presence. And when Hux gives orders to Kylo Ren, it can be clearer that Kylo is not the leader of the group.)
As in the real Ep 7, Kylo Ren attacks Maz's tavern, captures Rey. Han and Leia reunite.
Finn is committed to rescuing Rey, but Leia says it's unwise. People were wary of the First Order, but there's no organized Resistance, and no chance to win a fight against them on such short notice. She's clearly had her spirits crushed. Han then says that this Rey girl was taken by a Knight of Ren. And the knight had a light saber. Leia and Han both realize this must be their son.
In the Kylo-Rey interrogation, he offers to teach her, and have her join the Knights of Ren. They have a battle of wills, and she sees in his mind an island, and the coordinates he punched into a nav computer. This is how Rey is able to find Luke.
Han, Chewie, and Finn head to Starkiller Gate. Finn worked on it, and knows that while it's open, it's vulnerable. Meanwhile Leia calls in a few old allies to defend the Hosnian system. (I'd love to involve Poe here some more, but that's too heavy of a rewrite.)
As in the real Ep 7, the sun is consumed, hope fades, Kylo kills his father, and then Finn and Rey each fight Kylo.
The good guys blow up enough stuff that the gate becomes destabilized, so most of the First Order flees back across to the Uncharted Regions. We can give Poe something fun by having him see what's on the other side, which worries him. Finn is injured, and Rey goes to find Luke.
Instead of Starkiller Base being a doomsday weapon, Starkiller Gate is some ancient technology, that lets the First Order fleet bypass the treacherous space around the Uncharted Regions. The Gate consumes a star as a fuel source for each time it opens a portal. The Gate is so old that it actually has its own biosphere.
As in the real Ep 7, Poe's captured and tortured, Finn breaks him out, the ship crashes, Finn meets up with Rey, they steal the Falcon to escape, link up with Han and Chewie, get to Maz's tavern, Rey has a weird vision.
Kylo senses this weird vision. This will be our first moment of the two of them seeing each other through the Force link. It's very brief.
The First Order's fleet comes into orbit above a world; let's call it Hosnian. General Hux gives his fascist speech. He warns that the gate will consume their star if they do not immediately join the First Order. They must either die in darkness or join the darkness. (Give Hux a bodyguard from among the Knights of Ren, just to give them a bit more presence. And when Hux gives orders to Kylo Ren, it can be clearer that Kylo is not the leader of the group.)
As in the real Ep 7, Kylo Ren attacks Maz's tavern, captures Rey. Han and Leia reunite.
Finn is committed to rescuing Rey, but Leia says it's unwise. People were wary of the First Order, but there's no organized Resistance, and no chance to win a fight against them on such short notice. She's clearly had her spirits crushed. Han then says that this Rey girl was taken by a Knight of Ren. And the knight had a light saber. Leia and Han both realize this must be their son.
In the Kylo-Rey interrogation, he offers to teach her, and have her join the Knights of Ren. They have a battle of wills, and she sees in his mind an island, and the coordinates he punched into a nav computer. This is how Rey is able to find Luke.
Han, Chewie, and Finn head to Starkiller Gate. Finn worked on it, and knows that while it's open, it's vulnerable. Meanwhile Leia calls in a few old allies to defend the Hosnian system. (I'd love to involve Poe here some more, but that's too heavy of a rewrite.)
As in the real Ep 7, the sun is consumed, hope fades, Kylo kills his father, and then Finn and Rey each fight Kylo.
The good guys blow up enough stuff that the gate becomes destabilized, so most of the First Order flees back across to the Uncharted Regions. We can give Poe something fun by having him see what's on the other side, which worries him. Finn is injured, and Rey goes to find Luke.
Changes to TLJ
Short version - Leia dies when her ship is attacked, and so after killing Snoke, Ben is actually persuaded by Rey to renounce the Dark Side. He reveals that this whole time he'd been trying to get closer to Snoke, because there was some dark secret he wasn't ever willing to share.
We have a small time skip. Rey takes some time to find Luke, and the First Order takes some time to regroup.
The core difference here is that Kylo Ren meets with Snoke, who is proud that Kylo killed Han. He offers a chance to come learn the true purpose of the First Order, but first Kylo must prove himself by killing Leia as well. His conflict is that he needs to get closer to Snoke to decapitate the First Order, but it's tearing him apart. We come to gradually learn this through his Force connection conversations with Rey.
We don't have the First Order obliterate the Resistance, though. Instead, they lure Leia's fleet into an ambush, which is where Rose's sister dies, then pursue with overwhelming force. Leia and company jump to hyperspace and drop out next to an asteroid belt, which hides the planet Crait, where they hope to hide out until allies arrive. Kylo hesitates when he could kill Leia, but the other ships fire and she dies.
Meanwhile Rey gets her training from Luke, and is tempted to the Dark Side but hesitates. When she decides to leave to confront Kylo Ren, he stays behind. That's the last we see of him in this movie.
The rest of the fleet goes to ground on Crait, but they detect that the First Order has sent a ship to Canto Bight. That planet is a major arms dealer, and Akbar realizes the FO will be able to get a weapon that can crack their base's defenses. He sends Finn, Poe, and Rose to Canto Bight too.
There they run into Phasma, who's buying that big doom laser they use at the end. They rescue some kids, who are going to be press ganged into the First Order, but doing so gets them caught.
The climax timing is that simultaneously the doom laser is aimed at the Resistance base, and the Finn/Poe/Rose trio are about to be executed. Kylo turns on Snoke, and when Snoke dies, an alarm goes off at the execution, causing a distraction that lets the heroes make a run for it. Ben teams up with Rey to fight the guards, and maybe we let Akbar do a suicide attack since there's no Laura Dern character here, though that's got some cultural associations maybe it's best to avoid.
Ben flees with Rey, and together they link up and escape.
In the aftermath, Hux and his forces withdraw back to the Uncharted Region, where he is escorted by several Knights of Ren to the Sith Temple. He reports the misfortune of the fleet being damaged, and Snoke being slain, but not all news is misfortune. There is a new crop, fresh from Canto Bight. They shove forward that force-sensitive stable kid.
End with Palpatine, shrouded in shadows, saying, "Good, good."
The core difference here is that Kylo Ren meets with Snoke, who is proud that Kylo killed Han. He offers a chance to come learn the true purpose of the First Order, but first Kylo must prove himself by killing Leia as well. His conflict is that he needs to get closer to Snoke to decapitate the First Order, but it's tearing him apart. We come to gradually learn this through his Force connection conversations with Rey.
We don't have the First Order obliterate the Resistance, though. Instead, they lure Leia's fleet into an ambush, which is where Rose's sister dies, then pursue with overwhelming force. Leia and company jump to hyperspace and drop out next to an asteroid belt, which hides the planet Crait, where they hope to hide out until allies arrive. Kylo hesitates when he could kill Leia, but the other ships fire and she dies.
Meanwhile Rey gets her training from Luke, and is tempted to the Dark Side but hesitates. When she decides to leave to confront Kylo Ren, he stays behind. That's the last we see of him in this movie.
The rest of the fleet goes to ground on Crait, but they detect that the First Order has sent a ship to Canto Bight. That planet is a major arms dealer, and Akbar realizes the FO will be able to get a weapon that can crack their base's defenses. He sends Finn, Poe, and Rose to Canto Bight too.
There they run into Phasma, who's buying that big doom laser they use at the end. They rescue some kids, who are going to be press ganged into the First Order, but doing so gets them caught.
The climax timing is that simultaneously the doom laser is aimed at the Resistance base, and the Finn/Poe/Rose trio are about to be executed. Kylo turns on Snoke, and when Snoke dies, an alarm goes off at the execution, causing a distraction that lets the heroes make a run for it. Ben teams up with Rey to fight the guards, and maybe we let Akbar do a suicide attack since there's no Laura Dern character here, though that's got some cultural associations maybe it's best to avoid.
Ben flees with Rey, and together they link up and escape.
In the aftermath, Hux and his forces withdraw back to the Uncharted Region, where he is escorted by several Knights of Ren to the Sith Temple. He reports the misfortune of the fleet being damaged, and Snoke being slain, but not all news is misfortune. There is a new crop, fresh from Canto Bight. They shove forward that force-sensitive stable kid.
End with Palpatine, shrouded in shadows, saying, "Good, good."
Changes to TRoS
Short version - We explicitly have the characters contacting spirits from the past, which is why they're traveling all over, instead of just following clue A to clue B to clue C.
Erm, heavy rewrite? Putting Ben Solo on the side of the good guys is a big change.
Rather than a series of locations with different plot coupons, I'd have the journey be to gather allies: deserter storm troopers, heart-of-gold smugglers, some fan service, etc. Along the way, Ben and Rey commune with the spirits of lost Jedi. We can hit all the same locations, just rejigger the whys.
If we have to keep the fleet of Star Destroyers, at least remove their Death Star beams, and make it clear that the First Order has some worlds here they conquered that are building them. Maybe just have fewer of them, but have them staffed by conscripts, so Finn can have a hero moment rallying them to rise up and resist.
Eh, I'm not sure how to make this work, and I've been typing for, like, three hours.
It is a shame if we don't have some lightsaber on lightsaber action. Maybe Palpatine does possess Rey?
Have Luke do his magical transmission thing to trick and defeat Palpatine, maybe?
Rather than a series of locations with different plot coupons, I'd have the journey be to gather allies: deserter storm troopers, heart-of-gold smugglers, some fan service, etc. Along the way, Ben and Rey commune with the spirits of lost Jedi. We can hit all the same locations, just rejigger the whys.
If we have to keep the fleet of Star Destroyers, at least remove their Death Star beams, and make it clear that the First Order has some worlds here they conquered that are building them. Maybe just have fewer of them, but have them staffed by conscripts, so Finn can have a hero moment rallying them to rise up and resist.
Eh, I'm not sure how to make this work, and I've been typing for, like, three hours.
It is a shame if we don't have some lightsaber on lightsaber action. Maybe Palpatine does possess Rey?
Have Luke do his magical transmission thing to trick and defeat Palpatine, maybe?
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My goal at the end is that anyone believes they can become a force user and make the galaxy a better place.
Luke and Kylo create new orders (knights of Ren, and whatever Luke calls his), so that there is no more Sith/Jedi. But, of course, they are similar things.....but not the same.
Jedi can now marry (the lutherans of good force users, I guess). There is "always there are two" or whatever with the dark side anymore.
I like a lot of the other suggestions above, but my goal would be launch a lot of new stories about new people/non-humans that are force users.
Luke and Kylo create new orders (knights of Ren, and whatever Luke calls his), so that there is no more Sith/Jedi. But, of course, they are similar things.....but not the same.
Jedi can now marry (the lutherans of good force users, I guess). There is "always there are two" or whatever with the dark side anymore.
I like a lot of the other suggestions above, but my goal would be launch a lot of new stories about new people/non-humans that are force users.
Zardnaar
Legend
They've always had lots of different force traditions. They can always recreate the Jedi and Sith as needed it's impossible to wipe them out now.
Not in the movies. I am talking about the movies.......Give me new stories. Please.
Zardnaar
Legend
True. Witches of Dathomir made the cartoons.
Eltab
Lord of the Hidden Layer
I want to go back to Disney's "Session Zero" and re-write the history between RotJ and TFA. The heros' efforts succeed, but not to the extent they dreamed of.
- The New Republic is the largest and most powerful of the Imperial successor states; it also is surrounded by rivals and does not have the spare resources to go meddle in the Outback over rumors of a rising warlord or something.
- Luke is running a Force training school; his students include a few outstanding successes (one of whom takes over when he exiles himself) and a few dramatic failures (including Kylo) and lots of basic competent people who become building blocks of their local communities. At the beginning of the new trilogy, Luke is taking time alone with the Force to get himself re-centered. Artoo knows how to find him, and is not in hibernation.
- Han and Leia are able to keep their relationship alive. Leia is a diplomat and founds the Resistance because the Republic cannot / will not intervene; Han is both learning 'the lay of the land' for her and tracking their son from a distance.
- Lando is the CEO of a self-made conglomerate industrial company. Sometimes he hears rumors that his old friends would find interesting. He hears 'buzz' about that XL mobile shipyard / factory.
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