There's a rumor that his agent, Otis Adelbert Kline, who wrote a number of ERB knock-off's himself (a three book Venus series: Planet of Peril, Prince of Peril, Port of Peril, a two book Mars series: Swordsman of Mars, Outlaw of Mars and a few Tarzan knockoffs as well: Tam, Son of Tiger, Jan of the Jungle) actually wrote the ending to Almuric. Don't know if that's true or not. His own planetary romance stories are supposed to be pretty good. I haven't read any yet, but I just got the Mars series in the mail from a used book store; they were all republished in the 60s as cheap paperbacks.
Warrior Poet: I got your email; thanks for the feedback! Great stuff, and very useful to me. You pointed out mostly a lot of minor writing idiosynchrocies of mine, and I will probably update the story at some point with almost all of your advice integrated.
But I want to move forward before I spend too much time revising and rewriting what's already there. I hope to have a chapter 3 posted this week or early next week.