D&D 5E I made a trailer!


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Good work :)

I wonder though if emphasising that the characters are based on ‘real world’ legendary figures would be a good marketing angle thats not currently captured in this video.
(Also Im not generally a phone for spinning text, but for first trailer its a great peice)
 



That was great. Some of the images didn't match the text. I was expecting a vampire or invisible man and then a griffin (?) pops up. And the text scrolling at the end scroll was way too fast. At first I thought it was a list of patreons or supporters. I watched the video several times to admire at the artwork and I noticed as the words dissolve into the matrix like effect that it was a mixture of letters and math symbols and brackets. The brackets seemed out of place given the theme. But overall it's great. I really like the artwork.
 

That was great. Some of the images didn't match the text. I was expecting a vampire or invisible man and then a griffin (?) pops up. And the text scrolling at the end scroll was way too fast. At first I thought it was a list of patreons or supporters. I watched the video several times to admire at the artwork and I noticed as the words dissolve into the matrix like effect that it was a mixture of letters and math symbols and brackets. The brackets seemed out of place given the theme. But overall it's great. I really like the artwork.

Maybe the Invisible man was riding the Griffin? :p

but yeah, that Griffin appearing with its disdainful scowl was a bit incongrous
 

New version! I spent a few hours tweaking, smithed out a couple images, improved some transitions, trimmed that lengthy ending, and a whole bunch more stuff!

 


I also made a GIF!

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