EricNoah
Adventurer
Definite thumbs up to me -- your personality is starting to shine through, and it seems less like a bunch of lists. Still, there are somethings that deserve the list treatment and I'm sure when you get tired of trying to work Map a Week into a sentence you'll figure out a good compromise.
I like the idea of highlighting key words to call attention to paragraphs -- or even mini "headlines". Kinda like this old news:
Master Tools Poll: You can participate in three polls about Master Tools here. The first poll asks about your plans to purchase the initial Master Tools product; the second asks you to pick the most important unsupported MT feature; and the third ... (etc.)
This is a prose passage but the headline allows the reader to decide whether this paragraph is relevant to him/her before reading the whole thing.
I don't think all news items need such treatment, however.
edit: Oops, I see you did this very thing for one article ("New D20 products available"). That's the idea, I think a little more of that would help guide folks.
I like the idea of highlighting key words to call attention to paragraphs -- or even mini "headlines". Kinda like this old news:
Master Tools Poll: You can participate in three polls about Master Tools here. The first poll asks about your plans to purchase the initial Master Tools product; the second asks you to pick the most important unsupported MT feature; and the third ... (etc.)
This is a prose passage but the headline allows the reader to decide whether this paragraph is relevant to him/her before reading the whole thing.
I don't think all news items need such treatment, however.
edit: Oops, I see you did this very thing for one article ("New D20 products available"). That's the idea, I think a little more of that would help guide folks.
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