CanadienneBacon
Explorer
Blind Azathoth, here are my comments regarding Ravi:
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- First off, nicely written background. It's very workmanlike in that it explains the details of the character that it needs to and is based in reality. Nothing seems extravagant or out-of-place. I enjoy that in a character. It's well-written, the prose is precise and is correct. Thank you for including so many ties to Sandpoing (the father, being an acolyte to Zantus, etc.) Gives me something to work with.
- The feats Augment Healing and Improved Power are both fine. Thank you for utilizing Dragon material for your character.
- If you could please select a sub-race of Human for Ravi, that would be grand. Choices include Varisian, Chelaxian, and Shoanti. Shoanti may not be the best choice, but either of the other two would probably fit nicely. With the proper touch, you could get Shoanti to work if you wanted it so.
- I'm having a hard time reconciling your language/skill point selection. You've got Chelaxian, Common, Draconic, Dwarvish, Elvish, Goblin, Thassilonian, and Varisian listed. You spent 4 skill points on languages and have a +2 Int. Common you get for free. Unless there's a racial thing with either Varisian or Chelaxian going on there, you may have overextended yourself by one language. Let me know.
- You've spent only 28/36 skill points for Ravi.