renau1g: Storm is listed as having a +4 shield bonus and no Dex bonus to AC, instead of the other way around; you also have his farsighted trait listed as only a -1 to Search, although the right number is in the skills section. You're one point short on his bow attack bonus. Other than that, everything looks fine.
greenstar: Looks like you spent too many points for Raysuldra's ability scores. She's listed as having a +2 BAB instead of +1. Could you also add attack modifiers and Str bonus to damage for you attacks? You forgot the Barbarian speed boost. She's short four skill points. Everything else looks good.
greenstar: Looks like you spent too many points for Raysuldra's ability scores. She's listed as having a +2 BAB instead of +1. Could you also add attack modifiers and Str bonus to damage for you attacks? You forgot the Barbarian speed boost. She's short four skill points. Everything else looks good.