[STILL RECRUITING ALTERNATES] Lobo's Eberron Game

[Tor L'Tha]

Elocin you totally rock!

Thanks for making X a part of it.

I don't know if X is aproved yet. but thanks!!!

The barbarian where some usual, he know his roots, but is isolation at early age had made him with his mind of his one. He still could get terribly upset by thing wanting to just crush the places to the ground. But also had known the beauty of Khorvaire, the freshness of water even he never was thirsty, the taste of food even he never was hungry. He sometimes out of friendship and when others needed to sleep, he went over to Plate to watch the stars and talk about their existance. X wondered if Plate was a believer as himself. Where do your fait stand? Is it not incredible that the other races miss the beauty of the night and the stars? He often commented, being like a mantra for all the things he did not understand. That where a lot. 
A day at the in, the day all changed he was like usually thinking on Thaanas, trying to remember the last week he saw her. He knew that she had saying something about a mayor trip, but he couldn't remember where...  As a flash it strike him [COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=4]“Over the water, beyhond the teeth” [/SIZE][/COLOR]He says loudly making everyones head spin looking at him with big eyes. The bartender a halfling whit big think hands approaches [COLOR=SandyBrown]“Hey! You warforge” “don't you get upset” “you scares my customers making them believe that you will crush this place” “you should get some new colors” “you look like a Barbarian ready to rage on my finest wines and friends”[/COLOR] he goes away to attend a customer shaking his head saying something about how useless warforge are other places than killing on the battlefield.
Always in trouble...   
At the arrival of Plate he tels her what he remembered and asked her if she would join a little search in Xen’Drik's nearest shore.  We may even go to the harbor and see if theres more people wanting to make a bigger group. Like always they where the ones to take care of trouble.

 

[Lobo Lurker]

Okay, I went over the characters this morning and here are my findings. Note, I didn't check for skill synergies.

TOR L'THA: Just a few things:
In your Attribute Statblock:
- X's size should be Medium, not Large.
- Your ACP (Armor Check Penalty) = -5
- Your Speed is 20' (Fast Movement does not apply when you are wearing heavy armor)
- Your Spell Failure is 35%
Comment: X might be better served with the Mithril Body feat instead of the Adamantine Body feat as it: raises his dex bonus, allows fast movement, has a lower ACP (-2). The drawback is that your armor class would be lower and you wouldn't have damage reduction. You don't have to change it, this is just an observation.
In the Armor section:
- Replace the X's with 0's.
- Your Dex bonus to your armor class is +1, not +2 (due to your selection of the Adamantine Body feat)
In the Weapons section:
- Your slam attack should deal 1d4+4 damage
- The Talenta Boomerang is an exotic weapon. You do not have the proper feat required to use this weapon.
Your action points should be: 6 (5 + (level x 0.5))
Please list the weight of all your equipment.


TAILSPINNER: Plate is APPROVED. Though I think her background is a bit light, it does cover the basics.


SCOTLEY: Mortachi is APPROVED. Just be sure to swap out the Rapid Reload feat for the Martial Weapon: Sythe feat.


DEFCON 1: Rezzin is APPROVED. Please update your equipment weight though.


FERRIX: Just note that XP = 1,001 and DR: n/a. Can you come up with a background as well?


As soon as those changes are made, I'll approve both Tor L'Tha's and Ferrix's characters.


I'll start you all off together (i.e., no alternates) and eventually split you into two groups. Play nice please. I'll let you know when the first post is ready. In the meanwhile, please post all updated PCs into the Rogue's Gallery (link available in the very first post of this thread).

 

[Scotley]

Mortachi is up in the Rogue's Gallery with corrections.

 

[Tor L'Tha]

fixed. I got the ]
lvl 1 : Mithril Body feat instead.
please see trough the character. seems like i dont see the details at all.

 

[Lobo Lurker]

Tor L'Tha:
Your ACP: -5[/B] should be ACP: -2

The damage on your longsword should be 1d8+3

 

[Tor L'Tha]

done. thx for al help. character creation as you have notices isn't my strongest skill.

 

[Erekose13]

Excellent we all get in Thanks Elocin for getting Groswen down in the background. She should come across as a reporter very out of her element. She is not an adventurer and definitely not big on combat. However she should be fun to roleplay and has a few skills that might come in handy

 

[Tor L'Tha]

Did I miss a IC tread?

 

[Lobo Lurker]

Nope, not ye. Between my wife's starting work again (she's a teacher and Winter break is over... the Costa Rican school system is flip-flopped from the US school system) and her English classes on Saturday's I simply haven't had time (have to take care of my new baby).

I should post something later this week.

 

[Scotley]

Hey no problem, I understand the nature of your delay all too well. My 6 month old has a cold and the wife is working today. He's alsleep now and I might get lucky enough to check in will all my games before he wakes. The next generation of gamers has to come first!