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stonegod's Expedition to Castle Ravenloft: Ch. I [OOC]
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Kafkonia
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Perriwimple is pretty much done, if anyone wants to give him a look over. I just have to calculate his AC and give him his quarterstaff attack lines.
He'll be ready to join in whenever he's needed.
He'll be ready to join in whenever he's needed.
stonegod
Spawn of Khyber/LEB Judge
Kaf A few nit-picks on Perriwimple:
- He has 8 AP for being 6th IIRC
- You need to actually list his AC At the end of the line, put "; Dodge" to indicate he has the Dodge feat to modify it
- DR should go on the HP line: hp nn (6 HD); DR 1/-
- Which reminds me, he needs hit points!
- You can remove lines you don't use (Immunities, Ranged, etc.)
- For Atk Options, these include special actions or feats that can take place as part of combat action. These should be things like Power Attack, Two-Weapon Fighting, Improved Grapple, and Weapon Focus (unarmed)
- Perriwimple has no Special Actions
- Since he has no potions, no Combat Possessions either
- You don't have to list the Weapon/Armor profs that Fighter 1 gives you, and I'd prefer them on one line
- An advancement section, like the others, would be helpful
Otherwise, seems fine to me.
Edit: And one other thing---Perriwimple works for his uncle, the domineering Bildrath. In Barovia, it is unlikely any of Perriwimple's family were "noted adventurers", but is possible Grandma Margaret filled him with tales of a fanciful Barovian past. It is much more likely Perriwimple "liberated" his equipment from secret stores of his uncle that he somehow got from the Visanti.
- He has 8 AP for being 6th IIRC
- You need to actually list his AC
At the end of the line, put "; Dodge" to indicate he has the Dodge feat to modify it- DR should go on the HP line: hp nn (6 HD); DR 1/-
- Which reminds me, he needs hit points!
- You can remove lines you don't use (Immunities, Ranged, etc.)
- For Atk Options, these include special actions or feats that can take place as part of combat action. These should be things like Power Attack, Two-Weapon Fighting, Improved Grapple, and Weapon Focus (unarmed)
- Perriwimple has no Special Actions
- Since he has no potions, no Combat Possessions either
- You don't have to list the Weapon/Armor profs that Fighter 1 gives you, and I'd prefer them on one line
- An advancement section, like the others, would be helpful
Otherwise, seems fine to me.
Edit: And one other thing---Perriwimple works for his uncle, the domineering Bildrath. In Barovia, it is unlikely any of Perriwimple's family were "noted adventurers", but is possible Grandma Margaret filled him with tales of a fanciful Barovian past. It is much more likely Perriwimple "liberated" his equipment from secret stores of his uncle that he somehow got from the Visanti.
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