kirinke said:
Hmmm. Matt? You invited me in as a possible alternate. I already posted my character. She's something of a Harry Dresden type superhero, the mystical investigator.
Some comments: Matt's initial post of the thread isn't clear about this (no matter how many times I told him to write PL 11, 165 pp in the post... :\), but we're actually playing at PL 11, 165 pp.
Also, we're not using the wealth rules so if you want anything as equipment besides what the superhero team gives us (look at Johnny Nitro's character sheet where that's all listed as "free equipment"), and probably the basics, i.e., normal apartment/car type stuff, you'll have to buy it with the equipment feat. You can still take a benefit feat to be wealthy, but it won't let you get free equipment in game. For example, you'd have to pay pp for the sword.
You have no Cha score listed. That bad, eh?
I can't tell what you've done with your magic array. You have to list it in an easier to understand format for me. Maybe not Matt, though
Skills are 1 pp for 4 skill points. I don't think you have that right. Also, you aren't adding +7 for your Wis/Int bonuses to the skills based on Int/Wisdom.
Attack Bonus and Defense Bonus are 2 pp each. So that should be 24 pp for +12 to each, not 4 pp (maybe this was just a typo). Strength and Dex don't add to Defense or to Attacks, so there's no reason why your ranged attack would be higher than your melee attack as you haven't taken Attack Focus: Ranged.
The build needs a lot of work

You should take a look at the character creation examples I've posted
here, if you haven't done so already. We all made first characters once.
The Excel spreadsheet linked to in the first post of this thread is very helpful for making characters- that's what I use for all of my PCs. You should use that.