The Doomed Bastards: Reckoning (story complete)

This, by the way, is why massed Mindflayers have a disproportionately low CR. Massed mind blasts? Read the sig.

So to recap, sports fans... We've got Varo, off doing... something. Dar running for his life. One lone sorceress and a healer lost in the nastiest dungeon I've ever seen and quite possibly now split up.

And everyone else is dead. (Or undead, in Navev's case.)

Not looking so good for the home team on this one.
 

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*shrugs* I figured Burningspear was a non-native speaker of English. He did rather set himself up for that, though.

I don't have a problem being held to a higher standard than most posters, even most Story Hour authors, and I'll accept corrections to errors as they come up. Just keep in mind that professional authors have an editor, and while I do proof my chapters before I post, it is easy to miss one's own mistakes.

Like Goonalan, I have graded several thousand student essays in my career, and I think that the experience of critiquing others helped improve my writing. While I am not still a teacher, my current job involves even more nitpicking when it comes to language usage (you should see the state Department of Education's Correspondence Guide). So don't worry about offering corrections, I'm used to seeing them. Just don't take it personally if I reject suggestions with which I do not agree. One of the advantages of posting a free story on a Web site is that I can ignore my editors. :)

Check back later today for the update!

LB
 

Goonalan said:
Sorry Burningspear, and undoubtedly somebody will post in picking up my mistakes, but the English language is a cumbersome, often burdensome, tool- you should see the essays I have to mark, they make your post look… no, I can’t bring myself to say it.

Seems like you had nothing better to do than rip my good intended spelling criticism apart just to spite me?, i am not sure what your intention was with your reply, but the only thing you accomplished is to get me annoyed.
(by the way, compared to many a resident English person, my English is near flawless, and i am not even English born.)

My English was not per discussion, as i am not the writer with all the acclaim, although i wasn't out to burn Lazybones on his writing quality, which i clearly stated, i did want him to look more on his spelling, which seems sometimes at very big odds compared to his story quality.
I was trying to give critical yet constructive feedback, nothing more.

(To give an example, i see even in Dragon and Dungeon to many spelling mistakes, and that was a magazine we payed for, so even editors in a big company like Paizzo (sp?) are not perfect, and the amount you pay for such a magazine makes those kinds of mistakes very expensive imo)
 

Okay, let's stop the sniping over grammatical issues, please.

Time for more story:

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Chapter 320

DOUBT


Allera almost stumbled with the suddenness of the change, although there was no interruption in her tread from the moment she’d stepped forward in the hall, and reappeared in a small, dingy chamber with a heavy wooden door on one side and a low arch warding a narrow passage on the other. She shone her light around her, gauging her surroundings. She could clearly mark the borders of the teleportation circle now, presumably a mirror to the one that she’d just left. Her first instinct was to return at once, but she waited, unwilling to take precipitous action alone.

Had Dar come this way as well? She shone her torch into the corridor, but there were no markings to indicate that it had ever been used. Similarly the door looked ancient, its metal fittings pitted with rust.

She turned back as Letellia appeared through the teleporter. A magical light shone from a ring on her right hand.

“I was worried that you weren’t coming,” Allera said.

“I had to be certain that the circle was a transporter, and hadn’t disintegrated you,” the sorceress replied. “And for all I knew, it led straight to the front of Orcus’s throne.”

Allera shuddered. “I am glad that it does not. But I am grateful that you came through.”

“Remaining in that hall alone was not an attractive alternative. Did Dar come this way?”

“I have no way of knowing. If he did, I am sure that he would have returned...”

“There is no certaintly that the portals are two-way,” Letellia said. “Or that they return to the same destination, even if they do work from both sides.”

“There is one way to find out,” Allera said.

“If we get lost, we serve no one,” the sorceress said. “But I do not think it is wise to linger so near the arrival point; our pursuers will certainly be following.”

“The door, or the corridor?” Allera asked.

“I was thinking of another option. My dimension door can take us both out of here...”

“Wouldn’t that be risky, transporting without a clear destination in mind?”

“I have a clear destination in mind. While I do not know how far we are underground, I doubt that it is beyond the maximum range of the spell.”

Allera shook her head as she realized what the sorceress meant. “No! I won’t leave him...”

A loud noise from the corridor drew their attention; it was like a battering ram assaulting a castle gate, but it sounded a good distance away. “We may not have a choice.”

Allera started toward the corridor, but paused under the arch. Letellia, who had drawn out a scroll, heard it too. “Something is coming.”

Whatever it was, it wasn’t trying to conceal the noise of its passage; they could hear metal scraping on stone, a ferocious and spine-tingling noise. Letellia unrolled her scroll, a serious look drawn on her expression. But then Allera suddenly ran forward,the light of her torch shining into the tunnel ahead of her.

“Allera!” Letellia hissed, but the healer did not turn from her rush. The sorceress, uncertain, had no choice but to follow.

The mystery was resolved a few moments later, when she came upon Allera clinging to Corath Dar. The fighter looked rather the worse for wear, his armor covered in black char, and fresh blood splashed across his legs and feet. He did not look to be seriously injured, but blood marked his steps back down the tunnel behind him.

“What happened?” Letellia asked.

Dar shifted Allera in his grasp, without releasing her. “One of those damned flayers enspelled me, I fled blindly, and ran into a transporter of some sort.”

“We came the same way, that’s how we found you,” Allera said.

“I’d dropped my torch in the hound room, so I couldn’t see, but I just kept on running. I hit a wall; damn near knocked me out.” He looked behind the sorceress, then down at Allera. “The others?”

The healer shook her head, and Dar cursed. “The archmage?” he asked. By now, he’d spent enough time in the company of both Letellia and her uncle to sense when the latter was no longer hosted within the young woman’s body.

“The connection between us was broken when the Web was yanked off my head by one of the grimlocks,” the sorceress explained. “The trauma of the disruption... I fear that he may have been injured.”

“He survived a sudden transition before,” Allera said. “In the temple beyond the goblin city.”

Letellia nodded, but her face betrayed her doubts. “What lies in that direction?” she asked, indicating the passage behind them.

“Trouble. Once I cleared my head, I was able to make a flame using tinder and flints, but it didn’t last long. I made my way back to the transporter, but it took me someplace else, and then that one took me someplace else entire. There were some doors in that last room, and I tried one, only to come face to a hound that made the ones we battled look like puppies. It had three heads, and it breathed fire like a dragon’s gout.” He indicated the markings on his armor; fortunately the magic in the breastplate had shielded him from the worst of it.

“I decided I wasn’t going to stick around to see if its bite met its breath. I hit the teleporter again, ended up in a small room. I’d lost my light, but I found a door. The room beyond was full of freaking giant rats, this freaking mess on my legs is their blood. I couldn’t see, but I found another door, which I battered down. I wandered about a bit then saw your light, and here I am.”

“The transporters likely have a pattern to them, but it appears that they do not connect in a reciprocal fashion,” Letellia said.

“Well, we’re not going to get anywhere blundering around,” Dar said. “I would wager that the masters of this level know how they operate, and that they’ll find us soon enough.”

“Zafir Navev is with them,” Allera said.

“That bastard and I have some matters between us,” Dar growled.

“Letellia believes she can transport us out of the dungeon, using her dimension door spell.”

Dar regarded them for a long moment, and glanced down at the hilt of the sword at his hip. “All right. Do it.”

Letellia urged them to grasp her hand. She focused her mind and drew upon her power.

There was a twisted, lurching sensation, and for a moment the corridor spun around them. Allera and Dar broke the connection, and Letellia fell to her knees, voiding the contents of her stomach upon the cold ground. She recovered after a few moments, and Allera helped her back to her feet. The healer offered her a waterskin, and she drank gratefully. She couldn’t speak for a moment, but even Dar could tell what had happened.

“It looks like we aren’t going anywhere,” Dar said, his face grim.
 


Dungannon said:
Wow, now you're throwing random teleportation at them? At least you reunited them, so they can all die together.
Well, it's in the module, along with almost any dungeon trope that's ever been invented. :)

Have a great Christmas, everyone, and I'll be back on Wednesday.

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Chapter 321

HIDING


Unable to escape, and wary of another confrontation with the warlock and his mind flayer allies, the three surviving companions from Camar went to ground.

They quickly searched out their immediate area, looking for a place that looked relatively untraveled. Dar wiped off the blood from his boots and leggings, and they were careful to leave no obvious marks of their passage. Beyond the small room where Dar had battled the giant rats the passage continued, and after a time the corridor widened to a small room, an annex shaped like a triangle that extended out to the left for a good thirty feet. The place was empty save for some debris where one of the walls had begun to crumble, but they found black markings upon the floor and walls, signs that the abyssal hounds had spent time here. The foul scent of the creatures was stale, though, so they elected to hold here.

Letellia drew out a scroll and a length of rope from her pouch of holding. She also took out a few other items, a small pack of supplies and a pair of extra waterskins. She handed those items to Dar and Allera, and then removed a few smaller bags that she tucked into the pockets of her robe. Once that was done, she tucked the pouch under a small pile of debris in one corner of the room.

“What are you doing?” Dar asked.

“I am going to cast a spell that will create a place where we can hide,” the sorceress explained. “But I cannot bring the pouch into it without hazard. You should hide your quiver as well.”

Dar’s eyes narrowed, but he did as the sorceress said, withdrawing a quantity of arrows from the quiver and tucking them into his pack.

The sorceress unrolled her scroll and read the words upon it. The rope suddenly came alive in her hand, and rose into the air until it dangled from a point just shy of the ceiling, fifteen feet above their heads.

“Ascend,” she told them. Dar went up first, followed by Allera, each of them vanishing as they reached the top of the rope. Letellia came up last, grunting slightly with the effort. She joined the others in an empty, dark space, a featureless circle with utterly smooth gray walls. It was spacious enough for all of them, although Dar could not stand without bending his head a bit. Letellia drew up the rope, and laid it beside the opening, through which they could see the room below.

“What if someone looks up?” Dar asked.

“The transition cannot be detected from the far side,” Letellia explained. “We should be safe in here.”

“How long will it last?” Allera asked.

“My uncle scribed the scroll almost thirty years ago, when he was not quite as powerful as he is now. But it will last long enough for us to rest, and recover our spells.”

“Rest then,” Dar said, seating himself on the edge of the opening.

“What are we going to do?” Allera asked.

“Right now, you’re going to rest,” Dar said. “I will keep watch.”

“You won’t be able to see anything,” Letellia said. “Light cannot pass through the transition.”

But Dar remained at the edge of the opening, and as the two women rolled up their cloaks and laid their heads upon them, he remained there, silent, a dark look on his face.

He was still sitting there when Allera woke, the light of her everburning torch casting deep shadows into the crannies of his face. She rose, and crept over to him, careful not to disturb Letellia.

“You should try to get some sleep,” she told him.

“I am fine,” he said. She looked down through the transition of the extraplanar space, but saw only darkness. “I thought I saw something, earlier... I can’t be sure,” he said.

“They are probably looking for us.”

“I am sure they are.”

“Corath... what are we going to do?”

“I don’t know. The smart thing would be to get out of here as quickly as we can. This room has the black marks; could be that the hallway ahead connects back to where we fought the hounds. From there we could retrace our steps back up to the surface.”

“Without Nelan’s magic, how will we get up the river?”

“Maybe the archmage can figure something out, if he returns. Or maybe Letellia can use her teleportation magic; it seems to work on shorter distances.”

“I don’t think Orcus is going to let us escape,” Allera said, softly.

“We’re not beaten yet, angel.”

“Our enemies knew that we were coming,” Letellia said. The others turned; they hadn’t realized that she was awake. “The ambush was perfect; they struck at our weak points, and took full advantage of our vulnerabilities. If Allera hadn’t been able to hold them off, even for a few moments, we would have joined our companions in their fate.”

“What would you suggest then, lady?” Dar asked, his voice taut. “Do you have any spells that can get us out of here?”

“Perhaps. A series of dimension doors, over relatively short distances, might enable us to bypass the river. I was able to use the spell to move across the room during the battle; I don’t know how far the interference that disrupted by earlier attempt extends, but I can test it.”

“What about your uncle?”

“He will not be able to join us while we are in here. Perhaps, once we leave the refuge...” She turned her head abruptly. “The spell’s power is waning; we must have slept longer than I thought. Gather your things, we need to get down the rope before it ends.”

“What happens if we’re still inside when the spell ends?”

“Then you will get to enjoy a brief bout of flying,” the sorceress replied. But they had little in the way of possessions, and within a minute they had dropped the rope and descended back into the small chamber.

“Damn,” Dar said, checking the pile of debris against the wall. “My quiver’s gone.”

“And my pouch of holding,” Letellia confirmed.

“You were right, they were looking for us,” Allera said.

“We had best not linger here,” Letellia said. “The grimlocks are stupid, but the flayers may have be able to discern the significance of our leaving those two items here. There could be another ambush waiting for us.”

Dar drew Valor. “If they come, they will not find us easy prey.” But the fighter frowned; he remembered all too well the power of the illithids clouding his mind. He reached into the pouch at his belt, and drew out a small object, a ceramic disk about four inches across, covered in small, almost indistinguishable runes. He looked down at it in his hand, and his expression darkened further, warring with an expression that Allera had not often seen in his face: doubt.

“What is it?” she asked him.

“Varo gave this to me. In the antechamber, in the palace. Right after Talen had told him to go screw himself.”

“Varo?” Letellia asked. “The priest of Dagos?”

Dar nodded. “He told me that I should speak a word and break it if Nelan were to fall. The way he said it, it seemed like he expected it to happen. On our last trip, I’d almost forgotten it.” The cleric had given him something else, but he’d already delivered that item to its intended recipient. The significance of that object, as well as the disk he held, had kept him from sleep during that long vigil inside the shelter of Letellia’s rope trick spell.

“What does it do?” Allera asked.

“I do not know.”

Letellia spoke words of magic, and waved her hand over the disk. “Conjuration magic,” she said. “I think perhaps that...”

But Dar didn’t wait for her statement; he took the disk in both hands and broke it. The word he spoke was, “Thanera.”

There was a dull noise that enveloped them, like a powerful gust of wind, but the air around them did not move. A black rent appeared in the air, a tear in the very nature of reality that broadened like a dagger’s cut. A dark figure appeared in that opening, and stepped forward.

The newcomer was armored, and clad all in black steel that shone with a dull metallic sheen in the magical light of Allera’s torch. He bore a shield, another wedge of black metal that shrouded his left side, but it was impossible to discern more, for as the portal closed behind him, something else appeared around him, a cloying, terrible black aura that pulsed with evil, enveloping the man in a shroud of living darkness.

Within a heartbeat Dar whipped Valor out of its scabbard, ready to face assault.

But the newcomer did not attack, and after only a few more heartbeats it became clear that the black fog was not protecting him; rather, it was destroying him. The armored man lifted a hand and violet flashes tore through the darkness. Terrible sounds like distant animal screams hissed from the cloud, but it tightened its enfolding grasp, until they could see nothing but the vague outline of the man’s shape within.

Allera rushed forward, blue fire flaring from her hands. Dar tried to grasp her, to draw her back, but she ignored him, thrusting her hands into the black cloud. She screamed as her pale flesh entered the darkness, but then power erupted from her, a blazing scourge of light that blasted away the shadow, dissolving the cloud in a white flare. The clash of white and black lasted only a few seconds, and then it was done, and the room was quiet once more.

“I thank you, healer,” the armored man said. He lifted the visor of his helm, revealing the gaunt but familiar features of Licinius Varo.
 




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