D&D 5E Tiamat Unleashed - HELP!?

[ezo]

Add me to the review list if you want another set of eyes. I'll pass it on to @DND_Reborn and he might review it as well if you're interested in his thoughts.

 

[Quickleaf]

Incredible work Dave Congrats on your son's graduation!

 

[Dragonographer]

Hello! I registered to make this post.

I am in the tier 1 stage of a sort of post-Tyranny-of-Dragons campaign set in Faerun on the sword coast. The players have just finished the introductory section, which was a slightly embellished Dragons of Stormwreck Isle.

I came across this thread and the subject matter has got me pretty excited to see your take on all things Tiamat and chromatic. If you wouldn't mind sharing, I would eagerly and graciously provide feedback.

 

[FitzTheRuke]

Speaking of which, @dave2008, did I ever send you my notes on this? Did you still need any eyeballs to take a pass at it? (I'm sorry if I missed the boat, it fell off my radar at some point, and while I remember reading it, I don't remember if I ever compiled my notes and sent them, or if I never did.)

Life can be so full of distractions these days. I'd be happy to take a pass at a current draft if you still need it!

 

[dave2008]

Hello! I registered to make this post.

I am in the tier 1 stage of a sort of post-Tyranny-of-Dragons campaign set in Faerun on the sword coast. The players have just finished the introductory section, which was a slightly embellished Dragons of Stormwreck Isle.

I came across this thread and the subject matter has got me pretty excited to see your take on all things Tiamat and chromatic. If you wouldn't mind sharing, I would eagerly and graciously provide feedback.

I will absolutely be sharing. It is basically done, I am just waiting to get the 2025 Monster Manual to see how high end monsters (such as dragons) have been revised. Everything points to them being tougher at the same CR, but it is not 100% clear to me how much yet. Once get that it should just be a few days to update some statblocks and the it will be released!

With that being said, and if time is of an essence, I would be happy to share the draft with you. It is really complete expect for 1 piece of artwork and the statblock updates I mentioned. Let me know!

 

[dave2008]

Speaking of which, @dave2008, did I ever send you my notes on this? Did you still need any eyeballs to take a pass at it? (I'm sorry if I missed the boat, it fell off my radar at some point, and while I remember reading it, I don't remember if I ever compiled my notes and sent them, or if I never did.)

Life can be so full of distractions these days. I'd be happy to take a pass at a current draft if you still need it!

I have had two pretty thorough 3rd-party reviews so I think I am good at this point. One is a professional RPG editor here on EnWorld an offered to help for free - which I really appreciate!

Now, if I only had the coin to commission professional art!

And thank you again for the offer!

 

[aco175]

@Dragonographer welcome to the site.

 

[Ulorian - Agent of Chaos]

@dave2008 I'm sure your proofreaders have spotted it, but sight not site. Also, I think here I'd say 'most numerous', not 'more numerous'. More numerous than what?

 

[dave2008]

@dave2008 I'm sure your proofreaders have spotted it, but sight not site. Also, I think here I'd say 'most numerous', not 'more numerous'. More numerous than what?

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Actually I just checked and I don't have any changes on this paragraph. I will have to check and make sure I didn't missing on the editor's comments. That being said I think More numerous works here as this appendix is titled: Monsters of Azharul, the intention is the drgaonborn more numerous on the Prime than Azharul. Site is clearly wrong (and corrected now, thank you!) - it was the architect in my leaching out! Forutnately, I plan to have it go through one last round of editing after I make my 2025 MM updates. Hopefully there are a lot less this time. It took me 3 days, on and off, to get all the edits last time!

 

[Ulorian - Agent of Chaos]

Actually I just checked and I don't have any changes on this paragraph. I will have to check and make sure I didn't missing on the editor's comments. That being said I think More numerous works here as this appendix is titled: Monsters of Azharul, the intention is the drgaonborn more numerous on the Prime than Azharul. Site is clearly wrong (and corrected now, thank you!) - it was the architect in my leaching out! Forutnately, I plan to have it go through one last round of editing after I make my 2025 MM updates. Hopefully there are a lot less this time. It took me 3 days, on and off, to get all the edits last time!

Yeah, I see the argument for 'more numerous'.