Two new races I'd like some feedback on

Appleseeth

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I have a couple of major races I made for my homebrew campaign setting. I just updated them for 4th edition, ala warforged, and I'd like some feedback. I have them posted on my homepage, in PDF format for easy reading.

Here they are:

Shau'rai: Shau'Rai Race beta.pdf

Yuan-ti: Yuan-ti Race beta.pdf

The shau'rai are concepted as a physically weak, but mentally strong race, while the yuan-ti, are basically true yuan-ti, but kinda my own version of them. I'll hopefully be getting some art for them from a friend soon (I'm a terrible artist).

Thanks for any advice
 

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