Is there a link or something to the article? I'm trying to navigate Dragon+ and it's making my eyes bleed.
Anyway, as far as the stats go... I feel like when you stat up NPCs, you should decide to either build them like a PC or build them like a monster, and stick to it. If you're building Zak like a PC, then a maxed-out Strength is reasonable; he's a longsword wielder, it's his prime attack stat. But how does he have Dex 22? That isn't even possible for a PC, barring magic items. And it makes no sense for a Strength-based warrior to go so high.
If you're building Zak like a monster, on the other hand, there's no reason for that 20 Strength. He should have stats appropriate to his concept, which is super-agile (22 Dex is fine) but not super-strong. Just give him extra attacks, or bonus damage dice, or whatever, to make up for having Strength 16 or so.
And in no world does it make the slightest bit of sense for him to have Int 19. That's just silly.
Anyway, as far as the stats go... I feel like when you stat up NPCs, you should decide to either build them like a PC or build them like a monster, and stick to it. If you're building Zak like a PC, then a maxed-out Strength is reasonable; he's a longsword wielder, it's his prime attack stat. But how does he have Dex 22? That isn't even possible for a PC, barring magic items. And it makes no sense for a Strength-based warrior to go so high.
If you're building Zak like a monster, on the other hand, there's no reason for that 20 Strength. He should have stats appropriate to his concept, which is super-agile (22 Dex is fine) but not super-strong. Just give him extra attacks, or bonus damage dice, or whatever, to make up for having Strength 16 or so.
And in no world does it make the slightest bit of sense for him to have Int 19. That's just silly.