Character Submission Thread

[TillForPie]

Let me know what you decide about Wisdom/Con and I'll look it over again. ��

Wound up dropping Wisdom to 14 and bringing Con from 9 to 12 and Dex from 10 (8 base) to 12 (10 base). I've also dropped Fiendish Sorcery for Prehensile Tail. I've adjusted everything that those revisions would impact and implemented a bunch of snazzy formatting changes.

 

[FrancisJohn]

Hey, I'll finish looking at it tomorrow. Home sick with the kids today.

 

[Scott DeWar]

get well Francis John!

 

[FrancisJohn]

I'm fine, it's the kiddos. Stomach bug flying around NJ right now.

 

[Scott DeWar]

yuck!

 

[FrancisJohn]

Wound up dropping Wisdom to 14 and bringing Con from 9 to 12 and Dex from 10 (8 base) to 12 (10 base). I've also dropped Fiendish Sorcery for Prehensile Tail. I've adjusted everything that those revisions would impact and implemented a bunch of snazzy formatting changes.

new format looks great! i like how the details and background are up top now.... going to do that to my characters too.

maybe include what books the traits and feats are from.

typo in the thrown dagger section


otherwise

APPROVED!

 

[Aura]

I was looking over Abramac and he is hitting a grey area with the regional language thing. The problem with having Tritower as your place of origin is the regional language is still Low Landellian. So, although it's technically not Venza, it's more or less equivalent for purposes of the regional language. (I suppose that could be clarified up front, my first character has no regional language, either.)

Feel free to adjust as you like--you seem to have so many languages in your future the regional seems a minor issue, IMO, but I'll leave it to you.

The rest of the character seems rather good, particularly since the previous review was so complete.

 

[TillForPie]

His Tritower origin has become important enough to the character (with regards to him believing he was rescued by Thalina as a child) that I'll simply drop one of his languages. I'm swapping orc and goblin for celestial.

 

[Aura]

I understand. Pretty much the way it went for me, as well. In any case, as I said, the character was pretty well refined by the time I got there so the language issue is the only thing I was concerned about.

Abramac is APPROVED and ready for play in LPF. I see you've entered the DWI, it's a matter of time and organization until the next game for the lower levels launches--I'm presently assigned to all high-ish games as far as my DMing goes.

 

[Deepthought]

As being new here, and trying to find a game in this particular corner of the web, I created Sylvain the Willow (Deepthought) in hope of finding your favour.
Thanks and 42.