5E: Converting Monsters from White Dwarf Magazine for Fifth Edition

[Casimir Liber]

ok published here

 

[Cleon]

The largest and strongest Amiraspian Cyclopes, usually around 10 feet tall, becomes the chief of the tribe. A chief keeps the best treasure and equipment for its personal use, so might possess a shield or usable magic item.
 Cyclops chiefs rule by brute force and savagery, seizing whatever takes their fancy and beating down any opposition. Most are far-sighted enough to see humanoid monsters such as gnolls or goblins as minions to be conquered rather than just food.
 See Amiraspian Cyclops for further information.

Dang it, I kept on vaccilating whether to use singular Cyclops or plural Cyclopes in the first paragraph and ended up with both in the first paragraph.

Oh, and for the sake of consistency the Cyclop(e)s should not be capitalized in the first sentence, since the Monster Manual doesn't capitalize monster names in its Descriptions.

I'm also thinking the "best treasure" equipment might work better at the end.

If we follow your original version, which used plural, it ought to be:

Description #1 (Plural)​

The largest and strongest Amiraspian cyclopes, usually around 10 feet tall, become chiefs of their tribe. Cyclops chiefs rule by brute force and savagery, seizing whatever takes their fancy and beating down any opposition. Most are far-sighted enough to see humanoid monsters such as gnolls or goblins as minions to be conquered rather than just food.​

 An Amiraspian cyclops chief keeps the best treasure and equipment for its personal use, so might possess a shield or usable magic item.​

 See Amiraspian Cyclops for further information.​

Or we could keep it singular, in which case it should probably all be singular:

Description #2 (Singular)​

The largest and strongest Amiraspian cyclops in a tribe becomes the chief. Usually around 10 feet tall, this chief rules by brute force and savagery, seizing whatever takes their fancy and beating down any opposition. Most are far-sighted enough to see humanoid monsters such as gnolls or goblins as minions to be conquered rather than just food.​

 An Amiraspian cyclops chief keeps the best treasure and equipment for its personal use, so might possess a shield or usable magic item.​

 See Amiraspian Cyclops for further information.​

Which do you prefer?

 

[Casimir Liber]

plural sounds better so gon with that/ Amiraspian Cyclops Chief

 

[Cleon]

plural sounds better so gon with that/ Amiraspian Cyclops Chief

Updating the Amiraspian Cyclops Chief…

Hold on a second!

Why does the D&D Beyond Amiraspian Cyclops Chief have "chief" in all its abilities except for Hypnotic Stare, which has "chief clops". All of those should be "cyclops" as they're standard Amiraspian Cyclops powers, apart from Multiattack which should be "cyclops chief" as it has text changes from the normal version (since it has different weapons).

The Hypnotic Stare also has the old version of the text as it starts "The chief clops stares at a single individual up to 60 feet away" but should be the revised version that starts "As a bonus action, the cyclops's eye becomes a twisting vortex of colors and it stares at a creature within 60 feet".

 

[Cleon]

Have we finished with the regular Amiraspian Cyclops yet?

The most regular D&D Beyond version I can find is this one which is fine textually apart from a few minor formatting errors:

The Bite, Claw and Greatclub are lacking some spaces between the number and parentheses in their damage: they should be "11 (2d6 + 4)", "7 (1d6 + 4)" and "13 (2d8 + 4)" respectively if we follow the Monster Manual formatting.

It lacks a linespace before the "(Originally created by Albie Fiore; appeared in White Dwarf Magazine #21 (Oct/Nov 1980) as part of the Fiend Factory mini-module "One-Eye Canyon", edited by Albie Fiore.)" credit.

 

[Casimir Liber]

chief updated - Amiraspian Cyclops Chief

also Amiraspian Cyclops

 

[Cleon]

chief updated - Amiraspian Cyclops Chief

also Amiraspian Cyclops

They're still both missing spaces before most of the brackets in their weapons' damage.

For example, the chief's got:

Glaive. Melee Weapon Attack: +7 to hit, reach 10 ft., one target. Hit: 16(2d10+5) slashing damage.​

which should be:

Glaive. Melee Weapon Attack: +7 to hit, reach 10 ft., one target. Hit: 16 (2d10+5) slashing damage.​

The typos in the Chief's Bite, Claw and Glaive and the regular Cyclops's Bite, Claw and Greatclub.

The Chief should also have Armor Class 13 like the regular Cyclopes not the AC 15 the D&D Beyond version has for some reason, plus its Skills Perception +2 has gone AWOL.

 

[Casimir Liber]

There is formatting in the dndbeyond version (to make it rollable when used) that makes it easy to miss - Amiraspian Cyclops Chief

Amiraspian Cyclops

Monocular Illusion Resistance. The cyclops has advantage on saving throws against illusions that include visual elements it can see. Poo...

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[Cleon]

The basic Amiraspian Cyclops is fine, but the Chief needs a bit of spacing before the Credit, which is also all italics for some reason. The Description should end:

The largest and strongest Amiraspian cyclopes, usually around 10 feet tall, become chiefs of their tribe. Cyclops chiefs rule by brute force and savagery, seizing whatever takes their fancy and beating down any opposition. Most are far-sighted enough to see humanoid monsters such as gnolls or goblins as minions to be conquered rather than just food.
 An Amiraspian cyclops chief keeps the best treasure and equipment for its personal use, so might possess a shield or usable magic item.
 See Amiraspian Cyclops for further information.

(Originally created by Albie Fiore; appeared in White Dwarf Magazine #21 (Oct/Nov 1980) as part of the Fiend Factory mini-module "One-Eye Canyon", edited by Albie Fiore.)

It doesn't really matter that the basic Cyclops is all non-italics, but it should really have the White Dwarf Magazine #21 in italics too. I missed that I'd failed to format it properly until now and just fixed it.

Also forgot to do that to the Dragon Warriors, but they've all got Slantey Dwarves now!

 

[Casimir Liber]

Amiraspian Cyclops Chief