Herremann the Wise
First Post
Hi yangnome,
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Excellent story! I really enjoyed it.
Your writing was excellent in capturing how the narrator thought.
I agree with you so much about that picture though! If you look at his face in it's entirety - his expression is absolute and utter awe but then when you focus upon his eyes, you can feel his sensing of fear. I don't know where BSF got that photo from but my goodness was it fantastic to base a story around.
Unlike you, I really struggled to join the pictures together. It took me pretty much the whole of "Day One" as I called it to come up with a basic storyline joining the images. By Day Two I'd only written 1600 words with five and a half sections still to write - and they were the big ones too.
What can I say but that the whole Ceramic DM thing has just blown me away. The experience was fantastic! I don't care if the judges rip my story apart, I'm so happy to have finished it in the time constraints because I'm a really slow writer - just ask those people following my Story Hour.
Anyway, best of luck.
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Best Regards
Herremann the Wise
Spoiler blocked but free for all to read except obviously our judges.
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Excellent story! I really enjoyed it.
Your writing was excellent in capturing how the narrator thought.
I agree with you so much about that picture though! If you look at his face in it's entirety - his expression is absolute and utter awe but then when you focus upon his eyes, you can feel his sensing of fear. I don't know where BSF got that photo from but my goodness was it fantastic to base a story around.
Unlike you, I really struggled to join the pictures together. It took me pretty much the whole of "Day One" as I called it to come up with a basic storyline joining the images. By Day Two I'd only written 1600 words with five and a half sections still to write - and they were the big ones too.
What can I say but that the whole Ceramic DM thing has just blown me away. The experience was fantastic! I don't care if the judges rip my story apart, I'm so happy to have finished it in the time constraints because I'm a really slow writer - just ask those people following my Story Hour.
Anyway, best of luck.
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Best Regards
Herremann the Wise