Character Submission Thread

[sunshadow21]

I hadn't even thought about a picture; that one would work quite well. I'll get the languages fixed later tonight. I haven't pinned down precisely where he is from; I'm leaning toward somewhere in the southern portions of the Baronies, a place that has has changed hands several times since he left home, but beyond that, I really hadn't given it much thought. It would likely be some place close to Tal Hollow, but not Tal Hollow itself. The lifestyle was a late addition, so a lot of that cheap stuff had already been bought and accounted for, and I didn't feel like redoing all of the math.

 

[BigB]

Can I get an approval eval for Tsaaruk?

Thanks
http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Tsaaruk(BIGB)#Finances

 

[Scott DeWar]

Can I get an approval eval for Tsaaruk?

Thanks
http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Tsaaruk(BIGB)#Finances

Wisdom ability modifier not correct. was +0, now +1 - corrected

a few format errors in weapons - corrected

weapon damage shows +5. You get +4 for Strength 19, but what is the 5th point? - needs fixing or explanation fixed

no traits chosen - is there a reason for this? fixed

moved fast movement and rage from feats to class features block.

I have to stop here, my blood sugar is going wonky on me.

ok, doing better - back to the salt mine .. .. ..

a few skills were useable untrained and still showed 0 in the total - fixed

that is all that I found. need to fix the stuff in red.

as only a suggestion, there is no long ranged weapon that I see. Might I recommend a light crossbow and 20 bolts for 37 gp?

now that I see the items in red are fixed, I would have to say

approval # 1 by non- judge

 

[GnomeWorks]

Hmm.

Can I get an approval? Linkage.

Danke.

 

[BigB]

Wisdom ability modifier not correct. was +0, now +1 - corrected

a few format errors in weapons - corrected

weapon damage shows +5. You get +4 for Strength 19, but what is the 5th point? - needs fixing or explanation

no traits chosen - is there a reason for this?

moved fast movement from feats to class features block.

I have to stop here, my blood sugar is going wonky on me.

ok, doing better - back to the salt mine .. .. ..

Thank You. Sorry about the errors!

The damage was an error - I corrected to 4.

I was not sure about the traits - I have added 2 traits but still not sure they are ok.

Thank you again for taking the time to look this over, offer advice and help.

 

[Satin Knights]

Hi. You are coming in just as we have a new game starting up. Perfect timing. The character sheets are close enough that you can go over to the Dunn Wright Inn and introduce yourselves. The game perrinmiller is starting is for first through third level characters. It will be a little dangerous for newbie characters, but the next game coming along might not be for another 4-6 weeks. You would be pushing the group from average to large size, but that also helps your survivability, and PM was planning for a large group.

We will take care looking over your sheets in parallel while you get started.
Welcome aboard.

 

[Scott DeWar]

Hmm.

Can I get an approval? Linkage.

Danke.

looking at it - like the crescent wrench!

Combat stats:
need to specify rolling hp level 2 and on or max-2

other then the above item, I can't find any thing else wrong.

approval # 1 by non- judge

 

[Scott DeWar]

[MENTION=6666968]Satin Knights[/MENTION], Are you looking at gnome works'?

 

[GnomeWorks]

need to specify rolling hp level 2 and on or max-2

Ah, wasn't aware I needed to make that decision at first level. Will fix.

 

[Scott DeWar]

Still need a judge's approval, but that might happen pretty soon if Satin Knights is on the job.