Drammattex
First Post
I like Shelly's writing. It's punchy and energetic, descriptive and action packed. Writing at Shelly's level is harder than it may seem; her metaphors are colorful and constant, and they showcase some brilliant creativity. I'm a fan.
That said, I had a little trouble following the monogamy article. Had I been the editor, I might have asked that she tighten it up a bit; the metaphor felt stretched at times. That's not to say I thought it was a bad column. It was a very good column. Just needed salt.
That said, I had a little trouble following the monogamy article. Had I been the editor, I might have asked that she tighten it up a bit; the metaphor felt stretched at times. That's not to say I thought it was a bad column. It was a very good column. Just needed salt.