If they lay 1d4 eggs per year, and the young stick around a bit more than a year, it's reasonable to have (at least) 1d6 young hanging around. So I'd like to bump the number of young to 1-6. (Note that large birds like ostriches and emus do stay with their parents about a year, and raptors don't mature for several years even if some leave the nest a bit earlier.)
Your proposed advancement is fine.
That's odd, I made a reply to this post before updating the
Boobrie Working Draft but it seems to have vanished.
Anyhow, I'll try to remember what I said before and repost it.
Firstly, while large raptors can take several years to mature they spend most of that looking after themselves. A golden eagle, for example, only gets fed by its parents for a few month after its fledged and is then forced to fly off and fend for itself. The parents are raising a new clutch each year.
There are a few predatory real-life bird that hunt in families, i.e. some hornbills, but the AD&D Boobrie specifies that they have a #Encounter of 1-2 and are only encountered alone or in pairs, which definitely means they don't do the same.
Further, it's only the "Black Boobrie" that specifies the number of eggs/young as 1-4, the "Greater Boobrie" says that two young Boobries can occasionally be encountered (25%) by themselves, so it's
possible they only hatch 1-2 young - although personally I think that these are more likely to be immature birds that have formed a pair-bond but have yet to breed successfully.
In either case, I'm strongly in favour of having a "nest" with 1-4 noncombatant eggs or young and see no evidence in any of the AD&D entries that support an Org entry that has 1-6 combatworthy young Boobries, e.g.:
Organization: Solitary, pair, or nest (2 plus 1-4 eggs or non-combative young)