WizarDru
Adventurer
Re: UK - thoughts on your system
I mentioned this before, and I'll reiterate it now...the layout of this document does not serve it well. As I told you before, UK, the font is difficult to read and distracting, the drop-shadows interfere with the text and the layout is both somewhat confusing and ugly. The material is dry and dense enough, without the layout of the document making it more undesirable.
As I said before, your system may work beautifully...but the amount of work it requires for precious little extra benefit seems to be self-defeating, to me. I'm glad to hear that you're planning on expanding the situational modifiers section, because right now, it's next to useless. If I have to fudge that much information, it's of no more use than normal CR and my understanding of the threat involved.
And for the record, Fenes 2 may have been the first to actually say it, but I assumed it was understood you held active disdain for the rules in question. Your text is very dismissive of the original work, and I assumed this was intended, so I didn't bother to comment on it. My players have reviewed the material, and their reaction was generally the same...at least, those who could actually spend time trying to penetrate it.
LokiDR said:As for your PDF, I think it suffers some significant issues. The titles are in a hard to read format. The drop-shadows used on the page border titles are distracting from the text. I shouldn't have to work to identify the chaper title. The side notes are sloppy, and occasionally insulting. No person who could understand your system would not understand the <= symbol. You forward reference several places (like "see next section") which is a horrid tatic. You should be more up-front about your redefinition of terms like EL in the first place, rather than leaving people with the conception of EL and CR from the DMG untill nearly 2/3rd of way through the article.
I mentioned this before, and I'll reiterate it now...the layout of this document does not serve it well. As I told you before, UK, the font is difficult to read and distracting, the drop-shadows interfere with the text and the layout is both somewhat confusing and ugly. The material is dry and dense enough, without the layout of the document making it more undesirable.
As I said before, your system may work beautifully...but the amount of work it requires for precious little extra benefit seems to be self-defeating, to me. I'm glad to hear that you're planning on expanding the situational modifiers section, because right now, it's next to useless. If I have to fudge that much information, it's of no more use than normal CR and my understanding of the threat involved.
And for the record, Fenes 2 may have been the first to actually say it, but I assumed it was understood you held active disdain for the rules in question. Your text is very dismissive of the original work, and I assumed this was intended, so I didn't bother to comment on it. My players have reviewed the material, and their reaction was generally the same...at least, those who could actually spend time trying to penetrate it.