[Exalted] Storyline, need feedback(My players stay out, Rob, James, Jeremy, etc.)

blackshirt5

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OK, so I've finally got my storyline sketched out in my head.

In the first Age, during the Primordial War, Autochthon, a Primordial allied with the Exalts, forged four blades that came to be known as the Primordial War Blades. The Solar War Blade held within the Orichalcum the unbridled passion of the Unconquered Sun; The Sidereal War Blade contained the cunning powers of fate held by the Maiden's Exalts; the Terrestrial War Blade combined all 5 elements in one masterwork of craftsmanship; and the Lunar War Blade was as powerful and capricious as Luna herself. Using these blades, the champions of Creation led their armies to victory in the war, killing many Primordials and sealing the rest away in Malfeas.

Near the end of the First Age, the Deathlords were created by the Malfeans in the Underworld. The Deathlords and the Malfeans remembered well the power of the Primordial War Blades so, to give themselves an ace against the dead Primordials, the Mask of Winters, supreme among the Deathlords, crafted 4 Soul Swords to give to his champions for the day when he would rule Creation and return to the Underworld to slay the Malfeans. Soul Mirror, a twisted soulsteel reflection of the Sidereal War Blade, able to control the fate of a soul even after death; Soul Crusher, the mirror of the Solar War Blade, able to destroy the will of an opponent, leaving him without passion, waiting for the release of death; Soul Slayer, the counterpart of the Terrestrial War Blade, releasing the fury of the Underworld in a blast that obliterates the very soul of an enemy; and Soul Breaker, the dark version of the Lunar War Blade, which cracks the soul apart like a cheap gem, never to change. Thankfully for the world, Mask of Winters lost the swords in a sudden and bold assault by the Fair Folk, who cruelly scattered the swords throughout Creation, where they were hidden by Solars.
 

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Centuries passed; the War Blades were forgotten, passed into the myths of time, all except the Terrestrial War Blade, which was recovered and locked away in the Imperial Manse. The Soul Blades were never forgotten, however, by Mask of Winters, who to this day searches for them.

Soul Mirror is hidden in Mount Metagalapa, guarded by a powerful dragon.
Soul Crusher is hidden in the ruins of Denandsor.
Soul Breaker is hidden in the ruins of the Floating Palace.
Soul Edge is in Nexus; it's location can only be found by unlocking the secrets of the Tombs of Nexus.

Similarly, the War Blades:
Solar War Blade is hidden in Rathess; it's wielded by a Third Circle Demon who is bound to a Solar's tomb.
Lunar War Blade is Broken, actually; the blade is all that's left, it needs a new hilt that can only be made from the purest moonsilver from the East, dug up by the wielder.
Terrestrial War Blade is held by the Realm, in the Imperial Manse.
Sidereal War Blade is hidden in the Floating Palace.

OK, so it starts off as them searching for a way to reforge the Lunar War Blade to fight off Mask of Winters, who is readying to invade Nexus to reclaim the Soul Edge; along the way, it turns into something much more, with the action taking them all across Creation(Power Word: Airship :) ) and fighting against varied enemies and hunted by the Wyld Hunt. Eventually, I plan on having them fight against the Scarlet Empress and the Ebon Dragon in the Imperial City as they fight against a horde of demon-corrupted Dragon-Bloods and Third Circle demons.
 


Very cool! And epic...you'll be able to run that with your group for quite some time (which, in my opinion, is a good thing).
 


Sounds cool.

One question though, when did Mask of Winters become supreme amoung the Deathlords? Is it just a change you decided to make or am I missing something?
 




Not to mention Soul Reaver. :) Kidding.

I just changed it to make Mask of Winters supreme among the Deathlords; he had the Soul Swords and used that to quickly claim supremacy within the Underworld, at least over the other Deathlords.
 

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