Percy's return was meaningless to me.Ace32 said:Percy's return is noble, but rather short.
Dobby's death was well done I think, certainly it at the least had the ring of being "fully told".Dobby appears for almost as many pages as it takes for Harry to dig his grave and hold his funeral.
This was really the biggest "plot" problem I had. If Snape had been Killing Cursed, then Harry would never know? It was just a strange accident of fate that put Snape in the position to die slowly. The "memory" extraction was one of the scene's in the book (like Nagini attacking Potter) where the writing didn't paint a very good image for me, and I didn't immediately grasp what was happening.Snape's ultimate sacrifice is forced, short, and ultimately pointless - he serves as Dumbledore's post-it note.
Their deaths were off-screen, and not very invested. At first when I read it, I thought they actually MIGHT be sleeping or something.Remus and Tonks make a few brief appearances and then get offed to serve as some sort of parallel to Harry's parents - ironic, considering Harry attempted to spare little Teddy that fate earlier in the book.
I'm not sure I can explain it, but I do understand it, in some way. Maybe it's because the Killing Curse tears your soul, or because of the special link between them, or any number of things, but it made sense to me that Vold had to deal the strike that would kill that portion of Harry that was his soul.Then of course, there is the issue of Harry's survival as the 7th horcrux. Ok, I get that Harry needed to die for it to be destroyed... I suppose. But if it was so easy to just zap him, kill the Voldemort bit, and then let him wake up back - why did it need to be Voldy who did it?
It was hilarious to me, because the Order makes a point of saying that he can fly, and it's obviously something unusual.(how could Voldy fly? did they ever address that?),
It worked for me, because their duel was not about raw power or magical talent. It was about the quirks of fate that led to Vold's fall, with Harry as the central figure.this just seemed a bit much. At least give us the satisfaction of having Harry duel with Voldemort a bit before he was killed by accident for the umpteenth time.
It certainly could have and should have been done better, but it was fine for what it was.Finally, the epilogue.
All in all, I did actually like the book. I just felt like it suffered a bit under its own weight. To be honest, I've prefered the movie portrayals of the characters and the simplified plotlines a bit more, if only because they actually make the story feel somewhat heroic.
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Answer: hubris. Riddle had no shortage of it.Whizbang Dustyboots said:I have one quibble: Why would Voldemort believe no one had ever found the Lost Items version of the Room of Requirement when it was filled to the brim with other people's stuff?
That was hardcore, as was Narcissa Malfoy turning out to be a mother first, and a Neutral Evil bitch on wheels second. I honestly believe this is a series that only a parent could have written the way it turned out.blargney the second said:Oh yeah, and Molly Weasley vs Bellatrix? That was boss.
Tiberius said:Obviously by this point, spoilers.
I would tend to doubt that Harry went into being an Auror, but for a different reason than the fact of Voldemort's defeat. Aurors could reasonably expect to get into a lot of fights over the course of their career. Harry wanted the power of the Elder Wand to die with him, once his time is up. If he is ever defeated in combat, the ownership of the wand passes, apparently, to the victor. Thus, if he was so much as Disarmed even once over the remaining course of his life, the wand's power would remain unbroken. He's much more likely to stay out of duels if he's enjoying a quiet life with Ginny than if he's on the front lines of Dark wizard catching.

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