Ace32 said:
Percy's return is noble, but rather short.
Percy's return was meaningless to me.
Dobby appears for almost as many pages as it takes for Harry to dig his grave and hold his funeral.
Dobby's death was well done I think, certainly it at the least had the ring of being "fully told".
Snape's ultimate sacrifice is forced, short, and ultimately pointless - he serves as Dumbledore's post-it note.
This was really the biggest "plot" problem I had. If Snape had been Killing Cursed, then Harry would never know? It was just a strange accident of fate that put Snape in the position to die slowly. The "memory" extraction was one of the scene's in the book (like Nagini attacking Potter) where the writing didn't paint a very good image for me, and I didn't immediately grasp what was happening.
Remus and Tonks make a few brief appearances and then get offed to serve as some sort of parallel to Harry's parents - ironic, considering Harry attempted to spare little Teddy that fate earlier in the book.
Their deaths were off-screen, and not very invested. At first when I read it, I thought they actually MIGHT be sleeping or something.
The thing is, I didn't like it, because immediately after Harry finds out they're dead and his Godson has no parents, he then must go die. It wasn't raised in the text or anything, so oh well.
Then of course, there is the issue of Harry's survival as the 7th horcrux. Ok, I get that Harry needed to die for it to be destroyed... I suppose. But if it was so easy to just zap him, kill the Voldemort bit, and then let him wake up back - why did it need to be Voldy who did it?
I'm not sure I can explain it, but I do understand it, in some way. Maybe it's because the Killing Curse tears your soul, or because of the special link between them, or any number of things, but it made sense to me that Vold had to deal the strike that would kill that portion of Harry that was his soul.
(how could Voldy fly? did they ever address that?),
It was hilarious to me, because the Order makes a point of saying that he can fly, and it's obviously something unusual.
Meanwhile, in Movie 5, by all appearances, every death eater there was flying.
this just seemed a bit much. At least give us the satisfaction of having Harry duel with Voldemort a bit before he was killed by accident for the umpteenth time.
It worked for me, because their duel was not about raw power or magical talent. It was about the quirks of fate that led to Vold's fall, with Harry as the central figure.
It certainly could have and should have been done better, but it was fine for what it was.
It did fail in updating the world, and did anyone doubt that at that point Harry/Ginny and Hermione/ Ron would be together?
More would have been served by updating others, especially Luna, but I guess it didn't work out that way.
All in all, I did actually like the book. I just felt like it suffered a bit under its own weight. To be honest, I've prefered the movie portrayals of the characters and the simplified plotlines a bit more, if only because they actually make the story feel somewhat heroic.
Like I said, I think this book was made with the movies in mind. A lot of stuff will be trimmed and whatnot, and I'm sure the epilogue will look better on camera than the description gives.