Wow, thanks for help. It does look roughly stupidly powerful. I think it might be still a tad too powerful for this campaign, does it have any level adjustment?
Yes. It has 12 racial HD and a +8 level adjustment. If you look at the progression, it says at each level if you gain a HD. If not, you're effectively "gaining" +1 point of your LA. You would not be able to take a class level until epic levels. As for being powerful, you have to remember: It for the standard levels 1-20 of play is providing you with your racial AND class abilities effectively, since you can't take a class. And besides that, it's also dropping you 8 HD from a typical human along the way! By the end,
I'd say Astral Deva is roughly balanced with a Human [Class] 20. If anything, it will have a wider range of stuff, but a lot less ability to specialize. The only time it's noticeably more powerful, even with my friend's progression, is very early levels. you would be starting at 7 or so, so this isn't an issue.
I looked over the raptorians and I kinda liked the stats but not the actual creatures themselves. For some reason they don't appeal to my ascetics. I wonder if my Dm will let me create a race of winged humans...probably not though. But the concept of what I wanted was spot on. I am trying to move away from the book of nine swords because I found the system of abilities and need to prepare ahead of time a little overwhelming.
Raptorans - You could always try and re-flavor the race while leaving the mechanics the same. Maybe they're faintly related to the elemental plane of air (already have some ties). Maybe they're descended from celestials or dragons, and have the wing appearance to match. Of course, in the latter two cases, you'd likely gain a "blooded" type, like dragon blooded, which is a minor boon as it opens up options like draconic feats.
ToB - Yeah, I kinda figured so, a lot of people don't want to bother with it. If you have C.Champion and still want an aerial charger, check out Lion Totem Barbarian. It lets you trade Fast Movement for Pounce. Your DM might ban it on sight, though.
I think I have finally decided on a character concept. I thought about my character from our 4th edition campaign and saw that I had a fighter that was basically a striker. I think I intended this character to at least be similar. That character uses a bastard sword over a great sword, and a long sword because its simply a better weapon.
I don't know what this means.... Longsword > Bastard Sword > Greatsword and thus he uses a longsword?
Well, the astral deva comes across as being a tad underpowered to me at ECL20. I think what the designers did was try to make it more attractive by front-loading many of its abilities (for instance, you get 5 outsider HD for your 1st 5 lvs, sr at lv8 and the equivalent of a 5th lv spell at 3rd lv - because wotc was too lazy to come up with a proper progression for them?). As such, it is fairly powerful at lower lvs, and slows down at mid-higher lvs. If you don't expect your campaign to last past lv12, it was a fairly powerful choice for a PC.
Also, I felt that while it received a lot of defensive capabilities, its offensive prowess left a little to be desired. It was hard to kill, but didn't really do much damage, and so was relegated to a support role for most part.
From seeing that player in action with his astral deva, I'd agree with your assessment completely. he used a reach weapon and had Flyby Attack, generally either using spell-like abilities (and wands) as primarily a buffer and party healer or doing skirmishing melee attacks for small damage. The lack of class and only the typical feat allotment by hit dice (and reduced HD at that) make it very hard to be an offensive powerhouse, though his character was indeed very hard to kill. And he still enjoyed it, it just...wasn't a massive damage dealer.