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Honestly - What is Eragon?

First off, Icy Cool: As you said you didn't read all the posts in this thread, you may not be aware that I answered many of the questions you asked. Feel free to ask follow-up questions after reading.

Merlion said:
For the record, this is not entirely accurate wether through mistake or purpose. I asked who *anyone* is to try and create objective criteria for a subjective area, and how such a thing could even exist as a final authority.

You and I were the ones conversing. I took "anyone" to include me, which is why I believed I should explain why I had the ability to make such a statement.

This is not a very good comparison. Medical practices are pretty much objective, especially in terms of execution.

As is writing. This is where you and I disagree. Many people buy and wear poorly made shoes, just like many people buy and read poorly written books. Many surgeries result in infections and complications after the fact because of sloppy work by the surgeon, but in the mind of the patient, it's still a success.

The other key thing to note here, as I've seen several notes about romance novels and "Aha, but don't some people think all fantasy is bad?", is that you have to judge each novel within the context of its intended genre. When I read a mystery novel, I don't complain if it's the same plot I've seen countless other times. When I read a romance novel, I don't complain that the conversations go on longer than they would in a fantasy novel. (And yes, I do read both of those genres as well, although neither as much as fantasy.)

By fantasy-novel standards, Eragon is bad. Now, people have made the good point that it's being sold as YA-lit, which demands different standards, and it's entirely possible that by those standards, it's merely mediocre. Heck, it's possible that Eragon is a very good book -- from the context of "Books to be read by children with no previous exposure to fantasy literature." That's a discussion worth having, I think. Trying to figure out what audience would be right for a given book is useful.

I think what really aggravates me about the "there's no real standard" argument is that it largely invalidates conversation. We might as well just have a poll for each book ("Did you like it?") instead of a conversation thread, since any discussion of character, plot structure, setting, and voice is just subjective according to your theory.

A question for you, Merilon -- and I mean this seriously. I'm not trying to shoo you away, and I want that clear:

You've said that the only meaningful standard of judgment is the reader's personal opinion.
You've said that you yourself haven't read the book.

Why are you posting in this thread?
 

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takyris said:
I think what really aggravates me about the "there's no real standard" argument is that it largely invalidates conversation. We might as well just have a poll for each book ("Did you like it?") instead of a conversation thread, since any discussion of character, plot structure, setting, and voice is just subjective according to your theory.
What about conversation in order to share ideas, rather than to establish the supremacy of your point over that over the other fellow's? That seems to me to be far more productive and worthwhile than simply proving someone wrong.

I agree that technical elements of writing can be objectively judged. I disagree that artistic and creative merit is objective. You admit as much in this paragraph of your own post:
"By fantasy-novel standards, Eragon is bad. Now, people have made the good point that it's being sold as YA-lit, which demands different standards, and it's entirely possible that by those standards, it's merely mediocre. Heck, it's possible that Eragon is a very good book -- from the context of "Books to be read by children with no previous exposure to fantasy literature." That's a discussion worth having, I think. Trying to figure out what audience would be right for a given book is useful."

That is subjectivity in a nutshell, namely that there are differing standards of judgement depending on who the reader is. The book remains the same, no matter how you classify it. It is the nature of the reader that allows for a subjective judgement of its artisitic and creative merits.
 

Mark Hope said:
It is the nature of the reader that allows for a subjective judgement of its artisitic and creative merits.


However, not all works of art are of equal artisitic value, as often measured by collective opinion and whatever other correlated values the group/society places upon them (as when a painting is auctioned or a first edition book is resold or an exhibit is flocked to in great numbers). To ignore general group opinion of the artisitic value of something is to shut oneself off from honing ones own artistic sensibilities. Perhaps not in this case, but sooner or later it is wise to simply admit that some things are simply crap.
 

You and I were the ones conversing. I took "anyone" to include me, which is why I believed I should explain why I had the ability to make such a statement.

Like I said, there was a bit of misunderstanding.


However, all of Umbran's points still stand.


This is where you and I disagree. Many people buy and wear poorly made shoes, just like many people buy and read poorly written books


But shoes can be judged objectively by physical standards that everyone can agree on. Shoes that fall apart in a day are badly made, because they dont serve their purpose. However, the primary purpose of most artistic works is to be enjoyed, and everybody has different ideas of whats enjoyable. And even within your acadmeic criteria, not all of the expert critics agree. Thats why its subjective.

That leads me to a question. Two actually. you've established that in your opinion, wether a written work is good or bad depends on standards of plot, characterization, voice etc as set down by the academic elite. Ok so heres what I question about that
1) I asked this one before, but you didnt address it, and I guess its actually several related questions itself. What exactly gives them the right to make those decisions? How are they decided on? How do they decide well this type of plot is bad and that type is good, this voice should always be used for this and never that etc. How can it be anything other than their opinions?

2) what if the elite experts disagree on something? Either on the "good" or "bad" of a specific work, or on the principals themselves? If two equally well trained "experts" both read a book, and one declares it "good" and the other that its "bad", which one is right? Doesnt the fact that this can happen mean that the criteria your so fond of are indeed subjective opinion and not objective law?


The other key thing to note here, as I've seen several notes about romance novels and "Aha, but don't some people think all fantasy is bad?", is that you have to judge each novel within the context of its intended genre. When I read a mystery novel, I don't complain if it's the same plot I've seen countless other times. When I read a romance novel, I don't complain that the conversations go on longer than they would in a fantasy novel. (And yes, I do read both of those genres as well, although neither as much as fantasy.)


You misunderstood again, although admitedly I didnt go into a lot of detail.

What I meant was, there are some of those among your gods of literature who believe that ALL fantasy fiction, the very style and subject matter of fantasy fiction, automatically go against the criteria you mentioned and are all automatically "bad writing", based on their interpretation of those criteria.


I think what really aggravates me about the "there's no real standard" argument is that it largely invalidates conversation. We might as well just have a poll for each book ("Did you like it?") instead of a conversation thread


First, as Mark Hope says, conversation doesnt soley imply making a judgement about the works quality. I would think someone of your credentials would realize that. One can still simply discuss the work itself apart from rating it, and even though enjoyment and quality are subjective, many find it interesting to find out other peoples opinions and the reasons behind them anyway.


since any discussion of character, plot structure, setting, and voice is just subjective according to your theory

It is, to a point, but that doesnt invalidate discussion of it. Anymore than your theory of absolute right and wrong of writting does. In your view you can look at a work and immediately determine its legitmacy with no discussion needed (except not really, because even using your criteria, you've even said it can vary, because some works may fail "the test" in some areas, but shine in others).

Also, as I've mentioned, I do feel that some works are *better written* than others. And that all authors can grow and improve and have flaws, and having those pointed out can help that proccess.


You've said that the only meaningful standard of judgment is the reader's personal opinion

Again you misunderstand. This is my belief. Anything, especially a creative work, that a person puts time, energy, thought and feeling into has worth and value and is not "bad", or "crap" in any objective sense, regardless of anyone's opinion.

Enjoyment of the work, is entirely a matter of read/viewer opinion.

Technical quality, in a creative work is a diffacult thing. There are certain standards or practices or whatever that are generally accepted as good to follow, however they can be broken or even unintentionaly glossed over to still result in a good work. This area has some partially objective aspects, but depending on the works finall purpose will probably still be subjective.


You've said that you yourself haven't read the book.Why are you posting in this thread?


This is another thing I'm surprised someone of your self proffessed expertise and intelligence needs to ask, especially since I've stated it more than once.

It also makes me think you tend to see and think of things in a very narrow focused way, which is probably why you apparently did well in school.

I have been speaking almost the entire time about general principles, brought on by some peoples posting about Eragon. People assuming it must be terrible because a 15 year old wrote it, and people stating that it sucks or its awful, simply because they didnt enjoy it, sparked me to comment on the broader issues. The fact that age and writing ability dont neccesarily have anything to do with each other, and the fact that its almost impossible for a creative work to be objectively "bad".

Discussions have a way of growing you know.
 

The book remains the same, no matter how you classify it. It is the nature of the reader that allows for a subjective judgement of its artisitic and creative merits.


And this is where you and I may disagree...or may just be thinking differently.


I would say that the judging of its artitstic and creative *quality* (which is generally going to be the same as enjoyment) are subjective. But its *merit* or more specifically *value* is automatic and non-subjective.


Semantics maybe, but the devil is in the details they say. Which brings me to..


Perhaps not in this case, but sooner or later it is wise to simply admit that some things are simply crap.


This is basically what I am on about. NOTHING that someone puts thought and feeling into is EVER "simply crap."

It may well not have the same level of technical skill as others. And many may well not enjoy it. But that doesnt make it "crap" (in other words, worthless.)


However, not all works of art are of equal artisitic value


Their *quality* may not be equal, but their *value* is
 


Merlion said:
This is basically what I am on about. NOTHING that someone puts thought and feeling into is EVER "simply crap."

Are you kidding? Please tell me you are kidding. There are piles of things out there that people put thought and feeling into that are simply crap. To quote Theodore Sturgeon, "90% of everything is crap".

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sturgeon's_law
 

Merlion said:
But shoes can be judged objectively by physical standards that everyone can agree on.

No, really, they can't. Some people are going to like some shoes, and some people will like other shoes. There are questions of comfort, of weight positioning, of the width in various locations, and so forth. If we go with your "there is no bad" theory, even a pair of shoes that falls apart after one use can be judged as wonderful because someone wore them for one night and liked them.

If you're going to play the "it's subjective" game, then everything is subjective.

But I believe that either I've been unclear or you've misunderstood me. In a lot of your quote, you're going on about my academic elitism and all that good stuff, which is wonderful, since I've been out of school for about eight years and can tell you that working at a video-game company writing dialogue isn't exactly academic elitism. You're also putting words in my mouth to the effect of "There is an absolute standard that nobody disagrees with, and all the academic elites agree on this." I never said this.

I will agree with you 150% that the line is blurry, that there's a lot of gray area. These standards are there to minimize the gray area, to come up with a basic set of principles that two people can use to talk intelligently about a given work.

I will disagree with you 150% that Eragon is in the blurry part.

That leads me to a question. Two actually. you've established that in your opinion, wether a written work is good or bad depends on standards of plot, characterization, voice etc as set down by the academic elite.

No.

As set down by those in the know in the genre in question.

If Eragon was trying to be the next Ulysses, then yes, the academic elite would be the people to ask about it. But it's trying to be fantasy, so the academic elite don't come into it.

Standards of plot, characterization, voice, and setting (among others) are set down by professionals in every field out there. Any fiction writing workshop is going to talk about that stuff, whether you're writing a mystery or a romance or an SF epic or a big fat fantasy novel. They'll have different standards, but they will all HAVE standards.

Ok so heres what I question about that
1) I asked this one before, but you didnt address it, and I guess its actually several related questions itself. What exactly gives them the right to make those decisions? How are they decided on? How do they decide well this type of plot is bad and that type is good, this voice should always be used for this and never that etc. How can it be anything other than their opinions?

1) Years, often decades of experience and critical study.

That's really just about it. They read a whole bunch of the genre in question, and they study it. They look at books that work and books that don't work, and they figure out what the differences are. They argue relentlessly over whether something was bad because it was a poorly done version of a good idea, or because it was a bad idea to begin with.

If what you're really asking is, "How is the idea of critical reading at all valid?", you're on your own. You don't have to accept any of this, just as I don't have to accept the assertion that there's no such thing as a bad book.

The reason that critical theory and the ideas of character and plot and setting and voice are are good things is that they give writers tools to use to become better at what they're doing, and that they give readers common ground on which to discuss a work. Instead of just "I liked it," "I didn't," "Okay, see you next week!", people can actually discuss the reasons why they did or did not like a given book, and what did or did not work for them.

2) what if the elite experts disagree on something? Either on the "good" or "bad" of a specific work, or on the principals themselves? If two equally well trained "experts" both read a book, and one declares it "good" and the other that its "bad", which one is right? Doesnt the fact that this can happen mean that the criteria your so fond of are indeed subjective opinion and not objective law?

No. It means that there's gray area. You're the one who wants it to be all or nothing. I in no way want it to be all or nothing. That said, in the vast majority of book reviews, critics who are able to differentiate between what they like and how they judge a book's different aspects are able to come to a relative agreement.

And again, that's not perfect. Sometimes a critic cannot get out of his own mindset, whether that means praising a bad book because it happened to hit his happy notes or slamming a good book because it triggered one of his pet peeves. That's why you get a wide range of opinions, so that if 98 people gave ERAGON a 3, 4, or 5, 1 person gave it a 1, and 1 person gave it a 10, you know that either the 2 wacky people really saw something nobody else did, or it pressed their personal buttons in a profound way (either good or bad). You also know that the vast majority of the reviewers gave it something in the mediocre-to-middling range.

I get that you'd like me to say "Aha! It's all absolutely thus!" so that you can poke holes in it, but it's really not all absolutely thus. Very few objective standards are that exact, precisely because an objective standard has to have the leeway to stand up to a wide range of opinions and still be valid.

My friend loves setting and grim writing. I love dialogue and happy writing. Our lists of favorite books do not overlap in any meaningful way. That said, I can still read a book and tell whether it's something that she might like, regardless of whether it's something I like. I can tell whether it's good in such a way that both of us will like it, good but weak in areas that matter to me, or bad but really strong in areas that she's going to love enough to get over the bad stuff.

And my friend and I can do that because we can separate our opinions from objective standards.

What I meant was, there are some of those among your gods of literature who believe that ALL fantasy fiction, the very style and subject matter of fantasy fiction, automatically go against the criteria you mentioned and are all automatically "bad writing", based on their interpretation of those criteria.

So?

If your point is, "Some academic people are snobs," I will try hard not to have a heart attack from surprise.

There are also some fantasy readers who turn up their noses at the fine literature section of the bookstore because that stuff is just for old stodgy academic elites.

Snobbery is everywhere. I don't see how that relates to this. If nobody in your world is allowed to say "This is a bad book" without it being snobbery, then there are a lot of snobs in your world.

First, as Mark Hope says, conversation doesnt soley imply making a judgement about the works quality. I would think someone of your credentials would realize that. One can still simply discuss the work itself apart from rating it, and even though enjoyment and quality are subjective, many find it interesting to find out other peoples opinions and the reasons behind them anyway.

Yeeeees.

But you haven't read the book.

I'm not talking about people in general. I'm talking about YOU. YOU say that the only valid criteria is "did I enjoy it?" If so, then by your own standards of judgment, you have nothing to contribute to this conversation at the moment until you actually read the book.

Also, as I've mentioned, I do feel that some works are *better written* than others. And that all authors can grow and improve and have flaws, and having those pointed out can help that proccess.

But what constitutes a flaw? Unless, of course, there actually is some standard of judgment out there somewhere.

Again you misunderstand. This is my belief. Anything, especially a creative work, that a person puts time, energy, thought and feeling into has worth and value and is not "bad", or "crap" in any objective sense, regardless of anyone's opinion.

Enjoyment of the work, is entirely a matter of read/viewer opinion.

Did you read above, multiple times, where I wrote that many people enjoy books that are bad? I mean, I could slap "by the standards of judgment for that genre" on the end of "bad" if it would make it more palatable for you.

Enjoyment is a matter of personal opinion.

But I do not subscribe to your notion that books are solely instruments of enjoyment. They are also demonstrations of craft, among other things, and a demonstration of craft can be judged by standards. Most of the standards grew out of a basic understanding of "here's what makes a book enjoyable for the most people", so there's a lot of overlap, but the two are distinct.

This is another thing I'm surprised someone of your self proffessed expertise and intelligence needs to ask, especially since I've stated it more than once.

Let's try it one more time. I'll see if my self-professed expertise helps.

It also makes me think you tend to see and think of things in a very narrow focused way, which is probably why you apparently did well in school.

I'll say what I said near the top of this post. There's a difference between saying "there is no gray area" and "this particular work is not in the gray part". I'm saying the latter. It's a poorly written book. I get that you want me to be saying the former, because the former is pretty easy to disprove, but that's not what I'm saying. Yeah, there's gray area, and there are places where people can honestly disagree.

But take "Eragon" into any reputable fantasy-novel workshop with your own name on the top, and people are going to tear it to shreds for having bad characters and a derivative plot.

I have been speaking almost the entire time about general principles, brought on by some peoples posting about Eragon. People assuming it must be terrible because a 15 year old wrote it, and people stating that it sucks or its awful, simply because they didnt enjoy it, sparked me to comment on the broader issues.

I didn't say that it was bad because a 15-year-old wrote it.

I didn't say that it was bad because I didn't enjoy it.

I said it was bad. I also said that one major reason it was published was because the author was 15 -- it's a stunt-casting book, the fantasy-lit equivalent of Charlotte Church.

I don't believe that age and writing ability have a 1:1 ratio, but I do believe that people generally get better at a craft the longer they practice it. By that logic, the kid's books will likely get better as he keeps writing, which coincidentally is also as he gets older. That doesn't mean that it would have been impossible for him to write a good book at his age. It didn't happen -- ERAGON is not a good book -- but the cause wasn't his age.

Discussions have a way of growing you know.

I do indeed. Do you understand how it might appear that you might be talking about ERAGON when you talk about these generalities in a thread about, well, ERAGON? If someone is talking about the Nazis and I step in and say, "Everyone deserves a second chance, and we shouldn't judge people," folks are going to assume that I'm talking about the Nazis, even if I'm just talking in generalities.

By all means, talk generalities. Let the bad book rest.
 

takyris said:
First off, Icy Cool: As you said you didn't read all the posts in this thread, you may not be aware that I answered many of the questions you asked. Feel free to ask follow-up questions after reading.

I finally had a moment to wade through the thread again. My eyes desperately wanted to glaze over the "merit" discussion between Mark Hope and Merlion, but I slogged through it. I see that you answered two of my questions, so instead of any "follow-up" questions, I'll just restate the two you didn't answer.

takyris said:
No, of course not. I also don't have publisher parents with contacts throughout the industry to hawk my book for me as a birthday present.

Is this evidence that his book is "bad"? Honest question.

takyris said:
To imply that one should overlook bad writing and a bad plot because of the writer's age is insulting to the writer as well as the reader.

I see that both you and Berandor are judging the novel partially based on the authors age. Where in this thread has anyone implied that Paolini should get a free pass because of his age? (For what it's worth, I think judging the author's work based on his age is a great disservice to the author).

takyris said:
Nothing. My comment was in reply to someone saying (to Whizbang or Chain Lightning, as I recall), "Oh yeah? Well, what major books have YOU published?" in response to their less-than-stellar feelings for Eragon.

That resembles what I said, but it's not what I said. I asked a legitimate question, which you appear to have interpreted incorrectly because of its location in the thread (i.e. it came after Whizbang Dustyboots criticised the book). Whenever I see someone online who claims to be a writer, and see them criticise another work, I ask for examples of their work (which reminds me, do you have any published work?). I then read those examples (if they are given) to determine how valid I think their opinions are. Sometimes, I stumble across some fantastic work. I'm doing the exact same thing now, after the posting of the old essay that Michael Moorcock wrote about Tolkein's work. I'm not particularly enjoying the first three Elric books (less than Eragon, actually), but I figured I'd read them so that I might be more informed if the subject of his books come up again.
 

IcyCool said:
I finally had a moment to wade through the thread again. My eyes desperately wanted to glaze over the "merit" discussion between Mark Hope and Merlion, but I slogged through it. I see that you answered two of my questions, so instead of any "follow-up" questions, I'll just restate the two you didn't answer.

Cool deal.

Is this evidence that his book is "bad"? Honest question.

Nope. The author's age isn't evidence of it being bad. Using your parents' connections to get the book published isn't evidence of it being bad.

It being bad is evidence of it being bad, though. And after the fact, once I have a bad book, I look for reasons that the bad book got published. The hype over his age and his parents' connections are logical reasons for a bad book to get published, but they are in no way the cause of the badness. It's a fine distinction, but an important one.

I see that both you and Berandor are judging the novel partially based on the authors age. Where in this thread has anyone implied that Paolini should get a free pass because of his age? (For what it's worth, I think judging the author's work based on his age is a great disservice to the author).

Merilon said:
"Personally I think we should be trying to encourage this sort of thing. The very fact that a 15 year old went ahead and spent the time and energy...and had the interest...to write a book, and then spent the time and energy to actually get it published, should be applauded."

That resembles what I said, but it's not what I said. I asked a legitimate question, which you appear to have interpreted incorrectly because of its location in the thread (i.e. it came after Whizbang Dustyboots criticised the book). Whenever I see someone online who claims to be a writer, and see them criticise another work, I ask for examples of their work (which reminds me, do you have any published work?). I then read those examples (if they are given) to determine how valid I think their opinions are.

So to be clear, if you're unpublished, your opinions are free and clear, but if you've had something published, you have to determine whether the opinion is valid or not?

There seems to be a bit of two-stepping here, and I appear to have interpreted what you said entirely correctly. You want to see a list of publications because you suspect that any criticism coming from someone who claims to be a writer is sour grapes.

My publications:
* "Dragons and Other Extinctions" in Realms of Fantasy, February 1999
* "Glass Beads" in Science Fiction Age, May 2000
* "I am Looking for a Book..." in Shelf-Life: The DreamHaven Bookstore Anthology
* "Why the Elders Bare Their Throats" in Strange Horizons, February 2003
* "No Questions Asked" in Vestal Review, April 2003
* "When She Grows a Soul" in Leading Edge, Winter 2003
* "Injure the Corners" in Amazing Stories, October 2004
* "Release the Knot" in Amazing Stories, December 2004
* "A Duel of Fathers and Sons" in Clash of Steel: The Reluctant Hero, March 2005

"Elders" and "Questions" are both findable online if you go to Strange Horizons or Vestal Review, respectively. I'm proudest of "Injure", "Release", and "Looking for a Book...", but they're a pain to find in print.
 

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