Thane:
Please state your class levels, alignment, gender, and race explicitly.
Leather armor is DR/slashing, not DR/bludgeoning.
You appear to be missing a skill. 8 from scout, 1 from human, 2 from house rule = 11. You have 10 maxed.
You also appear to be missing a feat. 1 from level 1, 1 from human, 1 from house rule, 1 from reward = 4. You have 3. I think you forgot that Thane was human
Alistia:
Looks good.
Enko's equipment:
I said 'small sickle'

Not the weapon-sized version. Just write down "herbalism tools" I guess, we don't need to know exactly what all's in the toolkit.
I'm not actually sure whether copper or bronze spark like iron and steel do, but for the sake of not making me look it up we'll say they do.
I'm more inclined to think you'd write notes with bits of charcoal on bark or small bits of tanned hide that are too irregular or small to be useful for anything else rather than actual parchment and ink. And, in reality, it's not something that's going to really have a lot of mechanical effect on the game, so I'm not concerned about its weight and cost. We'll just say that you always have something to write with and on in normal circumstances.
You won't need a winter blanket for a while. We're going to start in late spring, and a bedroll will keep you plenty warm enough.
6 days rations is probably too much, especially considering you can take 10 on the survival check to get along in the wilderness and feed two people with the result. The hamlets and farms here are at most maybe 5 hours walk apart. You shouldn't ever have to camp out when you're just visiting the outlying settlements in normal situations.