Thanks, MP. But I think your adventure had the most "going on," especially where the ingredients are concerned. You used all of the ingredients equally well, where I made really strong use of two ingredients and sort of glossed over the others.Nice entry, CNN. You've got some really good ideas going on there.
Thanks for your honest feedback. You totally caught me...that backpack and those three wishes really gave me trouble. I just couldn't figure out how to include them without it feeling contrived. In the end, I just sort of paid lip service to them and crossed my fingers.I think, CleverNickName, you should keep doing what you're doing well, but if you expect to take your game beyond the second round, you're going to have to do better with the ingredients, too. Don't settle for lip service.
I'm ready to go pretty much any time, personally.
Timing works fine for me. I won't be around much Sunday evening, but Monday's pretty open and I'll still have some time on Tuesday for spit and polish if needed.
With any luck, this contest will become a regular thing.
Took me a lot longer to actually get the whole thing on paper than I thought, but mine is up now. It is really pure 4E, so if you don't like 4E, just give it a FAIL and move on.My entry is up.