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Shalimar I don't think you can have Combat Martial Arts, you could not get it at Level 1, you need a BAB of +1, and it isn't on your bonus feat list, so you will have to replace that feat. I am aware the example in the book has a Fast Hero with Combat Martial Arts but that is an error.
Barsoomcore I count only four feats you should have five, the two normal for every starting character, the bonus from Rural Occupation, starting feat from your class, and the bonus for feat for second level. Also the rules for buying Used Equipment is on page 112 of D20 Modern in the sidebar, not a big deal though.
JimAde I don't see an occupation listed and you do not have the right amount of feats. Please list your occupation for me, so there is no question of what it is

I checked your online sheet it says Investigtive, looks good then, still be nice to add it to the character here. I count fout feats when you should hve five. One bonus feat for Occupation, two starting feats, starting feat for your class, and the bonus feat for second level.
Once the corrections are made I will start a Rogue's Gallery thread, for them to be posted. I have them ll on a crib sheet, but some people like them all easily accessible.
If you have questions please list them. I am still reviewing, LOL