Level Up (A5E) Martial Artistry (3pp book in the works) Ideas and Concepts

[Steampunkette]

Apropos of nothing in particular:

 

[Corinnguard]

Apropos of nothing in particular:

Well, this nothing is certainly something.

 

[Steampunkette]

Well, this nothing is certainly something.

It certainly is, it just doesn't pertain to anything in particular! I just woke up at 3:30am unable to sleep until I fleshed out a bunch of combat maneuvers... Speaking of. Have some more!

 

[Corinnguard]

It certainly is, it just doesn't pertain to anything in particular! I just woke up at 3:30am unable to sleep until I fleshed out a bunch of combat maneuvers... Speaking of. Have some more!

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Fighting and healing with surgical precision. The work of a combat medic.

 

[W'rkncacnter]

Apropos of nothing in particular:
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It certainly is, it just doesn't pertain to anything in particular! I just woke up at 3:30am unable to sleep until I fleshed out a bunch of combat maneuvers... Speaking of. Have some more!

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these are great. i do have a few comments, though (assuming, of course, these have already gone through proofreading and such, which...maybe they haven't).
1. strike fear doesn't specify how long the rattled condition lasts. is it one round? one minute? do they get a save at the end of each turn? what kind of save?
2. ricochet should be renamed, since there's already a biting zephyr maneuver with that name.
3. blooddraw and kidney strike are a bit confusingly written in terms of how many attacks they're supposed to let you make. is it only one attack, or a full attack action?

 

[Steampunkette]

these are great. i do have a few comments, though (assuming, of course, these have already gone through proofreading and such, which...maybe they haven't).
1. strike fear doesn't specify how long the rattled condition lasts. is it one round? one minute? do they get a save at the end of each turn? what kind of save?
2. ricochet should be renamed, since there's already a biting zephyr maneuver with that name.
3. blooddraw and kidney strike are a bit confusingly written in terms of how many attacks they're supposed to let you make. is it only one attack, or a full attack action?

This hasn't gone to any kind of proofreading or editing pass. Not even my own editing pass. This is me at 3am taking my Dev Notes and first-pass shaping them into something workable.

I'm just riding DAVE's dopamine where it leads me, for now! I'm really hoping to get far enough that all the rules-editing is cleared before my husband gets in on the grammatical editing pass...

Last night he got through 3 pages of the Champion and had a ton of notes on my inappropriate use of commas, my utter lack of colons and semicolons, and various linguistic nitpicks like "Woe Betide" not needing a "To" before describing who is getting some Woe.

It'll be cleaned up a lot. Promise!

1) No save, start of your next turn.
2) I'll look into Rebound or something similar. Maybe call it "Ricochet Something" or "Something's Ricochet" if I can't find anything strong enough.
3) It's meant to be taking your action to make that one attack.

 

[Steampunkette]

 

[Selganor]

Why do I sense a fire-based change in the near future?

 

[Corinnguard]

What about a more down-to-earth change?

 

[Steampunkette]

Ooo... Cover Sketch is coming along.