Jdvn1
Hanging in there. Better than the alternative.
Okay, I read the first few pages to get a feel for Ringly (he comes off as a jerk at first!), then I skipped around for story.
So, something was eating crops, so we camped out to find what it was. After a tough battle, they take down a poweful boar. Wellsey's research tells that it's a Fiendish Boar, likely to have come from a contaminated water source.
... Then I skipped around, and there were oxen, non-fiendish.
... Then I skipped around and there's a cave. Where we are now, and there's a creature next to a passageway.
What happened to the water source? Did we determine that it's inside the cave? I doubt it, but I skimmed too quickly, probably. Could I have a rundown from someone?
So, something was eating crops, so we camped out to find what it was. After a tough battle, they take down a poweful boar. Wellsey's research tells that it's a Fiendish Boar, likely to have come from a contaminated water source.
... Then I skipped around, and there were oxen, non-fiendish.
... Then I skipped around and there's a cave. Where we are now, and there's a creature next to a passageway.
What happened to the water source? Did we determine that it's inside the cave? I doubt it, but I skimmed too quickly, probably. Could I have a rundown from someone?