deadestdai
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Sephiroth no Miko said:Alright, deadestdai, here are my comments for Flaust:
--XP should be 85,000 (88,000 - 3,000) after the LA buy-off at 3rd level
--You should change the "+2 Paragon lvl3" under her Dex stat entry to something like "+2 gloves". That caused me some confusion initially (I finally realized that 20 was indeed the correct Dex score).
--Her hitpoints should be 62. (I'm assuming you took rogue at 1st, fighter at 2nd, the order of the rest doesn't matter.) 10+6+5+5+3+3+3+3+3+5+5+11=62.
--BAB should be +9/+4 (3 fighter + 4 rogue + 2 chaotician), not +10/+5. Oddly enough, her ranged attack with Thingie is correct. Her damage with it, however, should be 1d6+1, not 1d6+3, unless there are some bonuses in there I don't know about/can't find.
Thanks for pointing these out - they are changed accordingly.
--You also forgot to take out her tiefling paragon bonuses for her saves, so all of them should drop by 2. (Fort +6, Ref +14, Will +4)
Hrm.... PlanarHB, Savage Species and UA all confused me. Planar doesn't give the bonuses as standard, Savage Species does (Tables in the back of the book) and UA offers them as a whole new deal that involves losing level to get them. But I changed them as requested.
--Well, you calculated the number of skills points she should have, correctly.However, when I add up the number of ranks, it's something like 151 total (unless my math is really bad)
and that's not counting the Search skill that was listed twice. Uh, you're going to need to do some extensive reworking of her skills list.
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I don't know what the hell I was doing here. All those years of not doing crack are finally showing through. 128 skill points are flung amongst my skills now, also realised that Chaotician makes Knowledge skills class skills, so was pleasantly surprised there too.
--And finally, the price you have listed for celestial armor is wrong: it should be 22,400 gp. The 12,550 gp value you have listed is the cost to create it. :\ This, unfortunately, throw off your wealth since it suddenly catapults the total value of your gear to something over 96,000 gp.If you want to keep the armor, you're going to have to ditch over 8,000 gp worth of gear.
That's my poor eyesight and lack of paying attention to detail..... Got rid of the armour and signed up for a +3 Mithral Chain Shirt and stuck a +1 on her buckler instead - much cheaper, though she will miss her chance to fly!

Ehr, that should be it, I think. You might want to note somewhere that her home place is the Outlands (Sigil).
Good point. Now I can only hope that Sigil will play some sort of significant part in the adventure!