Max_Killjoy
First Post
I suggest you either drop the pretentious intellectualism, and focus on what can be of practical use to a game or else you get a lot more footnotes and more rigorous citations. Right now the essay is in an unhappy place between blogging and a term paper, where it doesn't work well as either.
You also should go back through the essay and strike out any words that don't add meaning. There seems to be a brain of some worth behind this essay, but its muddled behind walls of excessively ornate verbiage.
And I say that as a writer that is infamously verbose and bombastic.
For example, pare down:
"To a known extent, the imperative to keep the focus squarely on the PCs, and, on the other hand, the need to embed them within a larger social environment which is replete with particular institutions, hierarchical orders, histories, and symbolic systems point in contradictory directions."
To something more like:
"The imperative to keep the focus on the PC's, and on the other hand the need to embed them in a larger environment replete with social institutions, histories, and legends point in contradictory directions."
And this:
"Allowing for a little oversimplification, we might say that each approach is informed by a distinct fantasy aesthetic (both of which influenced fantasy gaming in important ways)."
To this:
"Each approach is informed by a distinct fantasy aesthetic that greatly influenced fantasy gaming."
We live in the era of postmodernist word-salad.
See also, the Sokal Affair... or perhaps "Pomobabble: Postmodern Newspeak and Constitutional "Meaning" for the Uninitiated" as published in the Michigan Law Review...