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On the first page? It's because of the text box/3rd column.Cergorach said:1.) Is it me or are the columns both not the same width?
I'll make them thinner. I think it's left over formatting from another document.2.) The lines are a bit thick for my tastes, they are very 'present' on the first page.
I don't follow. I'm required (blech) to put it on the front or back cover, or title page, and in 10 pnt font. I could create a "back cover", but it seems like a waste of good paper. Ditto with an actual cover. I'm looking for a "print n' go" sort of thing, where you can just print out the whole document without hassling over which pages to exclude (except the license page).3.) The requires the use of D&D etc isn't, how shall we say... Very well placed ;-) I would say, add another page, make that the 'cover' and then make page 2 the first page customers will see...
That's a thought. I don't care about the color in the rear box.4.) use of color, this will probably be printed out, so i would leave the color out of the D20 logo and the box on page 3. Saves the customers a lot of trouble when printing this on a printer with a color cardridge.
Initially, because while it looked alright in this instance, it looked odd when the topic title was shorter than the "Notes from the North" phrase. I suppose I could invent longer titles...where's the Enchiridion of Extended Verbiage when you need it?6.) Top Title, why don't you make it a two line header?
Yeah, that was in the works; I'll revise and repost the document tonight with footers, page numbers, thinner lines, smaller indents, and other changes.7.) If this will have more than one release with the same layout you might want to incorporate the title of the document in the page footer of each page.

OK8.) you might consider a bit more space under each of the subject lines.
Thanks!