Catulle, I've been thinking about Sabrina's family, and some things in it just don't add up, so I would like to change it a bit to make it fit and work with how things are actually going in the game.
The first thing is her parents, with the way things are going, I see no sane parent, ghoul or not effectively giving up their child to a vampire, even if he is the head of their family. There are a lot of things that don't fit, so, what I would like to do is have them dying, but when Sabrina was young enough to not remember. Effectively leaving the poor girl in her uncle's care as well as her brothers. It would also put more weight behind the reasons for Jemal's embrace. The parents wouldn't have been skipped over in favor of Jemal. It also leaves her more starved for female attention, and creates more of a need in her background for the other female Player characters, if they choose to take part, or not.
When I get rid of them, it frees up 2 backgroud points previously spent on Allies 2. I would shift it into Mentor to more fully represent Nathan, giving him 4 dots worth.
The other thing I would change is her dot of Fame over into willpower since it was a freebie dot anyway. I don't think I really want her famous for being kidnapped.
So what does everyone think? Is this reasonable, she isn't exactly a power house, so I don't really see it as a problem, and it fits her better then her current stats.