2nd Edit: Just reread it... why is it only after you hit Post that you catch the worst of your editing gaffes? Oh well, been looking at it for the last 3 hours straight and it all starts to blur together after a while. My Iron Fu is rusty...
Pro tip for the audience: avoid using your phone to write an IRON DM entry. Your auto-correct hates you.![]()
I have an old flip phone and my fingers hurt after a short text conversation with my girlfriend; can't imagine what they'd feel like after 13 pages!
I don't believe you would have fingers at the end of that.
I just read your 13 pages, and that is a fantastic piece of work. Very full of detail. Well done!
Will do from here-on out. Previous Iron DMs we weren't to post ANYTHING in the other thread aside from actual entries and all discussion was in this post. Is the other one for all general commentary from anyone, not just the participants?