Xeviat
Dungeon Mistress, she/her
I took that as being the reason why it’s in the first person. I’m fine with that.
It’s the past tense part that I don’t like. It sounds like they want you to feel like you’re telling a story to someone after the events have occurred, which doesn’t really appeal to me at the moment. Makes it sound like you can’t fail.
First-Person Present Tense would make my eyes bleed.