(Updated to 5e from original 1e monster by Barney Sloane, appearing in White Dwarf 29 "Fiend Factory" - "Desert Light" mini-module)
Any objections to me rewording this to be close to the format we used for the
Enslaver?, i.e.:
(Originally created by Barney Sloane; appeared in White Dwarf Magazine #29 (Feb/Mar 1982) as part of the Fiend Factory mini-module "The Desert Light", edited by Albie Fiore.)
Hmm… I'd be tempted to add the "Fiend Factory" and "edited by" to the Enslaver too, i.e.:
(Originally created by Roger E. Moore; appeared in White Dwarf Magazine #21 (Oct/Nov 1980) as part of the Fiend Factory mini-module "One-Eye Canyon", edited by Albie Fiore.)
instead of the current:
(Originally created by Roger E. Moore, first appearing in White Dwarf Magazine #21 (Oct/Nov 1980) as part of the mini-module "One-Eye Canyon" by Albie Fiore.)
EDIT: Yes, I like the above a lot better. I've added the following credit to the
Pine Kindred:
(Originally created by Julian Lawrence; appeared in White Dwarf Magazine #21 (Oct/Nov 1980) as part of the Fiend Factory mini-module "One-Eye Canyon", edited by Albie Fiore.)
EDITED EDIT: The additional varieties of Pine Kindred such as the
Resin-Thrall have a tweaked version of the above:
(Inspired by the Pine Kindred by Julian Lawrence; appeared in White Dwarf Magazine #21 (Oct/Nov 1980) as part of the Fiend Factory mini-module "One-Eye Canyon", edited by Albie Fiore.)