fireinthedust
Explorer
Shayuri's tenative background says that the character was a failed experiment and I hope that it is kept. It leads into some of the story about what is gong on in this campaign.
but there is no reason you couldn't have saved the half dead/undead from an attack and takin them to the temple where they meet the cleric of Pelor. Anything is possible, but like I said I like the discarded useless shell that comes into power.
Also fitd are you sure you don't wish to go half-elven and have two favored classes. (I thought there was a trait or feat that allowed for two favored classes also but don't see it now.) But note ranger although your first class need not be your favored.
HM
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Favored Class: I don't mind. Mostly he'll be a Wizard for several levels, which is far more than Ranger will be used. The issue I have is more that Eldritch Knight can't count as a Wizard, as it's a PrC.
Traits: I can't tell which ones are APG. I like the Rich Parents trait in the SRD! (rp-wise, his family are Elven nobility, with a plethora of obscure and mostly useless titles. He left with a pittance of gold (a mere 900gp?) and a fiery determination to slay the Undead; an obsession, perhaps)
Otherwise, I don't see traits that define him particularly. Some of them, the racial ones, don't strike me as necessarily that race (failed apprentice).
I'm ready for a go-over, as I did everything except odd equipment (rope, spellbook, etc.)