Ceramic DM -- Fall '06 ** yangnome wins! **

[Rodrigo Istalindir]

I posted 'em on the front page. Here they are again:

Round 2

1. WildGazebo vs. NiTessine
2. Halivar vs Paka
3. Roger vs Linderel
4. yangnome vs GuardianLurker

 

[GuardianLurker]

In your case, that ratio should be about .5% anticipation, 49.5% trepidation and 50% desperation. I look forward to redecorating the forum with your blood and entrails.

Hah. When you're in a superior position, there is no need for desperation. Unlike those low to the ground who must constantly fear being stepped on by the true giants. As for your decorating scheme - I like mine better. The wails and cries of my inferiors are so soothing. Or if, by chance, those phrasings are unclear, let me restate my position in a vernacular you are most undoubtedly more familiar and more comfortable with:

You want some? Come get it, bee***h!

 

[maxfieldjadenfox]

Oooh! Loving the smack talk!

 

[Rodrigo Istalindir]

Ok, looks like Round 2 starts tomorrow, noon-ish. Linderel, if you and Roger can both start today, let me know and I'll jumpstart you guys early. If any other pairs want to agree on a different start time, post here and I'll see what I can do.

Look for some special guest-pictures this round.

 

[Rpjunkie]

Thanks for all the comments, I do have to say though, it wasnt a dream. The guy at the end was the human waking up not where he was last and not knowing how he got there. I guess i should have tried to make that more clear. Being my first story ever. From comments i guess i have the promise of getting better LOL

Good luck to all the round 2 contestants and congrats to Guardianlurker for the win.

RPJ

 

[Rodrigo Istalindir]

Thanks for all the comments, I do have to say though, it wasnt a dream. The guy at the end was the human waking up not where he was last and not knowing how he got there. I guess i should have tried to make that more clear. Being my first story ever. From comments i guess i have the promise of getting better LOL

Good luck to all the round 2 contestants and congrats to Guardianlurker for the win.

RPJ

Definitely hope you try again.

A piece of advice from one of my early rounds (I think it was from Mythago) was to "dance with the point-of-view character what brung you." Switching point of view can be done effectively, but it really requires care to make sure you don't drop the reader in the process. It's one of those things where getting someone else to read your story really helps, since they'll be reading the story cold.

 

[Linderel]

Tomorrow actually suits me better than today, too, so if Roger doesn't have a problem with that, I'd like to start at the planned time.

 

[Roger]

Fine with me.

 

[Rodrigo Istalindir]

You know, it's a darn good thing this competition is run over the Internet. You guys are gonna want to kill me when you see the next batch of pictures.

 

[GuardianLurker]

Hey as long as they aren't... On second thought, I'll keep my mouth shut. Never give the GM ideas....