You forgot your trait bonuses to Bluff and Intimidate, but unlike with overspent points, I was comfortable just making those changes to the sheet. With that, Belendwar has one APPROVAL. He still needs one more to be eligible to gain XP, but that one doesn't need to come from a judge.
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Character Submission Thread
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true-darkmoon
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Alright, can't wait for the second Approval so I can begin 
Satin Knights
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One approval is enough that you can go into The Dunn Wright Inn tavern and start interacting with the other characters that are waiting for an adventure to start up. The second approval should come along in a couple days at most, when one of us gets the time. A new game starts up about every four to six weeks. The good news is we are getting to critical mass of new characters, so one should be coming up soon.
Since Rodents of Unusual Size has been going on for over two months now, I believe that means I'm eligible to submit a second character for consideration. Here's Llotah, a merfolk barbarian from the mean streets of Tritower.
http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Llotah_(Cyclopean)#Background
http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Llotah_(Cyclopean)#Background
Theodore Grimm
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Hi all. I'm new to EN world so I can't post the link to my character. His name is Vorn Burrak and he's a dwarf wizard. I have to wait for at least on approval before I can post in the Dunn Wright Inn, correct?
Satin Knights
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Ah, you're close enough. A quick look shows you got all the needed pieces and nothing controversial or waiting on a proposal. Go on in and introduce yourself. I will try to look over the character thoroughly in a few minutes.
Oh, Welcome Aboard!
Oh, Welcome Aboard!
Maidhc O Casain
Na Bith Mo Riocht Tá!
Welcome to ENWorld and LPF, Theodore!
Satin Knights
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Looking over Vorn:
A) Your AC was 10 low. Fixed.
B) I did a lot of tweaking of the formatting for consistency with other wiki pages.
C) You had shorted yourself a hundred gp on the left in the finances section. Fixed.
D) LPF has a 100% buy back of unused items. So, spend all but your last 10 gp to prepare. If you don't use something, you can always sell it back to the store for full price, unlike normal adventures where you only get half.
E) You have a toad. What is his name? What are his stats? Did you get rations for him?
F) Be very, very careful with your toad. He is out on assignment now rescuing a guy's wife, but we have a toad licker that frequents the DWI.
So, you are close to being ready , but you need to stat out the familiar.
A) Your AC was 10 low. Fixed.
B) I did a lot of tweaking of the formatting for consistency with other wiki pages.
C) You had shorted yourself a hundred gp on the left in the finances section. Fixed.
D) LPF has a 100% buy back of unused items. So, spend all but your last 10 gp to prepare. If you don't use something, you can always sell it back to the store for full price, unlike normal adventures where you only get half.
E) You have a toad. What is his name? What are his stats? Did you get rations for him?
F) Be very, very careful with your toad. He is out on assignment now rescuing a guy's wife, but we have a toad licker that frequents the DWI.
So, you are close to being ready , but you need to stat out the familiar.
Satin Knights
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Looking over Llotah:
a) the greatsword gets 1.5 * STR, so the raging damage went up.
b) You declared the FC bonus as skill points, but then didn't have it listed as such in the skills section. But, you did have a 1 in the INT, where it has a zero bonus. So, I switched them around so they are correct.
c) Some of the AC fields were not filled in. Fixed.
d) Rage give a +2 morale bonus to Will saves. Fixed.
e) Finances and weights were off a tad. Fixed.
Suggestions:
A) Find a picture for him. I know that is going to be a tough order, but there are some out there.
Other than that, looks good.
Llotah has his first APPROVAL of two.
a) the greatsword gets 1.5 * STR, so the raging damage went up.
b) You declared the FC bonus as skill points, but then didn't have it listed as such in the skills section. But, you did have a 1 in the INT, where it has a zero bonus. So, I switched them around so they are correct.
c) Some of the AC fields were not filled in. Fixed.
d) Rage give a +2 morale bonus to Will saves. Fixed.
e) Finances and weights were off a tad. Fixed.
Suggestions:
A) Find a picture for him. I know that is going to be a tough order, but there are some out there.
Other than that, looks good.
Llotah has his first APPROVAL of two.
Maidhc O Casain
Na Bith Mo Riocht Tá!
Reviewing Llotah, I find only one thing - the River Fighter trait is not from an allowed source in LPF, so you'll either need to submit a proposal to have it reviewed and approved by the judges or choose a different one.
If you want to submit a proposal I think you'll get it approved, as there's nothing at all overpowered about the trait that I can see and it's a highly situational use.
But I have to withhold Llotah's second approval until its resolved, so NOT (QUITE) YET.
Edit: Nice pic, BTW!
If you want to submit a proposal I think you'll get it approved, as there's nothing at all overpowered about the trait that I can see and it's a highly situational use.
But I have to withhold Llotah's second approval until its resolved, so NOT (QUITE) YET.
Edit: Nice pic, BTW!
