Twilight: I think you’re good to go. Take a look at the Occult rules on Thaumaturgy, and if you have the new magic source book (Ordex Codex or something like that), the section on the Arts is really neat. There are some very cool abilities that you can do without essence costs. I’m a little concerned that with your spell selection and artifacts that you will not have much chance to be an occultist. By this I mean when you are not involved with demons or spells, all you’ve got is your stuff and skills. So brush up on everything that you can do with the ability without charms. You’ve mastered the Occults. You’re one of the smartest people in Creation. You’ve got to be more than just a dude with an axe. Also your motivation is fine, but have you put any thought on why he hates the undead. There is nothing in your history that really says anything about them. Yes the creature you fought during your exaltation seemed connected to the dead somehow, but is there something more in addition?