trappedslider
Legend
Wha’hoppen? Did I miss something?
Why? Don't let some negative ass stop you. You've been here long enough, you know haters always feel free to share their opinion.
Are you guys enjoying them when I post them?
Wha’hoppen? Did I miss something?
Why? Don't let some negative ass stop you. You've been here long enough, you know haters always feel free to share their opinion.
Are you guys enjoying them when I post them?
my bad, I didn't notice but yeah this all like a dairy type of thing and yeah I think it is part of a propane tank, all of the super mutants or at least some of them wear it.I am amused. I like the touristy pictures. Is that one guy wearing a propane tank on his head?
One critique; proofread and edit. I saw some errors. Things spell check wouldn't catch because they are words. Like you wrote memory line instead of memory lane.
If all this is supposed to be written as first person as the character and that's the characters way of speaking then I am wrong. Keep up the good work.
I enjoy typing it up,but I'm cross posting it at four different places (reddit,here and two other forums) but if no one is finding them entertaining then I may stop cross posting and each place uses a different version of VBMy enjoyment is immaterial- did someone SAY something to you to diminish YOUR enjoyment?