Henchmen

[Raven Crowking]

Not sure if this is inappropriate, but I am sure you'll let me know if it is!

Anyway, here's an invite to read my most recently published story. I'd appreciate any feedback at all.

Raven Crowking

 

[Raven Crowking]

I see that someone out there looked at this message. Comments?

 

[WayneLigon]

Nice, And whoa, iHero is back from the grave? Extra cool.

 

[DarkSoldier]

Nice. I can't say anything more, because I don't need to.

 

[Wrath of the Swarm]

Excellent story overall.

However, the ending does not satisfy me. Wordplay rarely translates - am I to understand that the name "Hiro" could be easily mistaken for the Japanese word for 'hero'?