AntiStateQuixote
Enemy of the State
I think you beat me pretty soundly. Trying to keep it short (I was at 1800 words) I left out my background for the swamp and why it was haunted and how that tied in to previous wars between men and trolls.Well, Brent, I just want to say that I got pretty nervous when I saw your entry. I felt there were some total strokes of genius - for example, using the trolls gave the PCs a pretty big option. They could attack the trolls (with a weapon that gave them a huge advantage), or let things go easy with them. I was also pretty nervous because, well, my housewives weren't really strongly housewives.... their earlier marriages weren't really a plot element, but a background element. Looking back, I should have kept them married, and used their husbands a bit more.
So, I felt that you had me beat on most of the ingredients, with the possible exception of the Dry Well.
In any case, I thought it was a pretty close match, myself. Looking forward to next year - and your submission.
My "dry well" was obviously just a dry hole in the ground going to the Elemental Chaos. Again, some more description and such might have helped, but then it would have made it much longer.
I thought this was a no brainer 4e adventure. The skill challenges to cross the swamp and interaction with the potential enemies/allies . . . well, maybe it's just me. I love 4e and how easy it is to whip out encounters. I kept my encounter descriptions short, mainly because I felt like any DM can grab the Monster Builder and put together level appropriate encounters with the right monsters/feel. If I had written up the traps/obstacles/terrain for the final encounter that alone would have probably been 500 words or more!Wik said:As for the 4e "controversy", I think it is a much easier adventure to write adventures for than 3e, for sure. I can understand Phoam's dislike of part of the system, but after running it for a year, I think it can actually make better adventures than 3e once the GM knows what s/he's doing. At least, it works that way for me.
I enjoyed it, even if phoamslinger did rip me a new one.

And, yeah, I didn't read his post before I posted . . . oops.