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Iron DM 2009 - FINAL MATCH - it's over!

Well, Brent, I just want to say that I got pretty nervous when I saw your entry. I felt there were some total strokes of genius - for example, using the trolls gave the PCs a pretty big option. They could attack the trolls (with a weapon that gave them a huge advantage), or let things go easy with them. I was also pretty nervous because, well, my housewives weren't really strongly housewives.... their earlier marriages weren't really a plot element, but a background element. Looking back, I should have kept them married, and used their husbands a bit more.

So, I felt that you had me beat on most of the ingredients, with the possible exception of the Dry Well.

In any case, I thought it was a pretty close match, myself. Looking forward to next year - and your submission.
I think you beat me pretty soundly. Trying to keep it short (I was at 1800 words) I left out my background for the swamp and why it was haunted and how that tied in to previous wars between men and trolls.

My "dry well" was obviously just a dry hole in the ground going to the Elemental Chaos. Again, some more description and such might have helped, but then it would have made it much longer.

Wik said:
As for the 4e "controversy", I think it is a much easier adventure to write adventures for than 3e, for sure. I can understand Phoam's dislike of part of the system, but after running it for a year, I think it can actually make better adventures than 3e once the GM knows what s/he's doing. At least, it works that way for me.
I thought this was a no brainer 4e adventure. The skill challenges to cross the swamp and interaction with the potential enemies/allies . . . well, maybe it's just me. I love 4e and how easy it is to whip out encounters. I kept my encounter descriptions short, mainly because I felt like any DM can grab the Monster Builder and put together level appropriate encounters with the right monsters/feel. If I had written up the traps/obstacles/terrain for the final encounter that alone would have probably been 500 words or more!

I enjoyed it, even if phoamslinger did rip me a new one. :p

And, yeah, I didn't read his post before I posted . . . oops.
 

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I thought this was a no brainer 4e adventure. The skill challenges to cross the swamp and interaction with the potential enemies/allies . . . well, maybe it's just me. I love 4e and how easy it is to whip out encounters.

Just to make it clear that there's some diversity in Judging going on . . . I'm a big fan of 4e. I'm running two active campaigns, playing in more, and have absolutely no desire to go back to 3.5. That said, I think that the values of the Iron DM, and of the Rat Bastard Dungeon Masters as a whole, are values that transcend edition. Creating an evocative scene for your players, creating a story that they can get engaged with, doing more than stringing together a daisy chain of combat encounters -- that's a real challenge no matter which edition you're playing, and it's the difference between a good referee and a good dungeon master.

So, I respect Phoamy's antipathy for 4e, but I think in the end we're all talking about the same core ideas, anyway, so it doesn't matter if he's off his nut. ;)

-rg
 

Just to make it clear that there's some diversity in Judging going on . . . I'm a big fan of 4e. I'm running two active campaigns, playing in more, and have absolutely no desire to go back to 3.5. That said, I think that the values of the Iron DM, and of the Rat Bastard Dungeon Masters as a whole, are values that transcend edition. Creating an evocative scene for your players, creating a story that they can get engaged with, doing more than stringing together a daisy chain of combat encounters -- that's a real challenge no matter which edition you're playing, and it's the difference between a good referee and a good dungeon master.

So, I respect Phoamy's antipathy for 4e, but I think in the end we're all talking about the same core ideas, anyway, so it doesn't matter if he's off his nut. ;)

-rg

True enough, and I mostly agree. I think, in a hypothetical situation where two contestants submitted entries, and entry #1 was 3.5E, and #2 was 4e, that any of the current IRON DM judges' system preference wouldn't really come into play. They are approaching things fairly, of that I have no doubt.

I have to disagree, though, with your last statement, about how we're all talking about the "same core ideas". A different edition of preference can and will influence "core" ideas of D&D.

See, and here's where I agree with Brent's original point, there is the fact that some of the ingredients listed so far show a system preference, in terms of names and the like. To use an example (and I'm only using it because it's one I noticed, being involved and all), the "rogue hydra".

I saw that, and instantly thought "How does a hydra go 'rogue'? Aren't they 'rogue' and untamed by nature?". Brent thought the same thing, so we played with the terms. I think my "rogue" part of the entry was pretty weak - the only "rogue" part about it was how it was heading toward the main town on a warpath. But that was as close as I could get.

Turns out, when the judge thought of the ingredients, he was thinking along the lines of "rogue as a character class" hydra. Which, in any edition but 3E, isn't really a common way of thinking (you can't make a solo monster like a hydra into a rogue in 4e without some serious tweaking). So, that ingredient as intended had an obvious system bias - your own system of preference would influence how you viewed it.

To take the example a bit further, let's say I was perfect with my "rogue" hydra description. Let's say it was a trained hydra, and then it escaped from a circus or something, thus "going rogue". That's a valid use of the ingredient. But let's say my opponent thinks "rogue as a character class", because he's still thinking 3E, and makes a rogue as a character class hydra.

We both submit an ingredient, and we both use it well. If the entries are close, and the judge goes through ingredient by ingredient, who wins in this contest? We both used different interpretations of the same ingredient, but the winner is going to be the guy whose entry appeals most to the judge's edition of preference, because the judge will look at the rogue hydra he was thinking of when creating it, and look at the other hydra and say "well, it isn't really rogue".

For what it's worth, I'm not complaining about the judging system. It will have its holes, obviously, and problems like this arise in much larger competitions than this one. I just think it's an issue that should be considered by the judges, who may not realize that their own edition preferences can influence how they view an ingredient.

Another example: If the judge puts forward "blue dragon" as an ingredient, thinking of older edition blues, he has to be prepared for the 4e player to submit an ocean adventure as opposed to the 3e player's desert adventure... they're both equally "right". His preference for how blues are "supposed" to be should not influence the choices the contestants make in their entry... just the entry's value and adherence to the ingredients given.

My two cents. Hope it makes my point, without sounding like I'm complaining or anything like that. Just trying to point out that sometimes edition of preference can influence "core" ideas of D&D.
 

If the judge puts forward "blue dragon" as an ingredient, thinking of older edition blues, he has to be prepared for the 4e player to submit an ocean adventure as opposed to the 3e player's desert adventure... they're both equally "right".

Good points raised, Wik. Mind you, even as a rabid 4th Edition enthusiast, I still run my blue dragons in deserts. ;)

Also, when are Rechan and I facing off? Going by the unofficial list, I thought it was going to start today?
 

To use an example (and I'm only using it because it's one I noticed, being involved and all), the "rogue hydra".

I saw that, and instantly thought "How does a hydra go 'rogue'? Aren't they 'rogue' and untamed by nature?".

Turns out, when the judge thought of the ingredients, he was thinking along the lines of "rogue as a character class" hydra.

I have won many rounds through (or perhaps in spite of) deliberately playing with the meaning of the words.

No judge in my experience has ever dinged me because he had a specific word usage in mind that I failed to meet. Personally, when I see an ingredient like "rogue hydra," expect the judge to look for alternate meanings.

The first thing I do, each and every time I get the ingredient list, is go over the ingredients and look for alternate meanings. If you find alternate meanings for the ingredients, you expand your ingredient list, which makes it easier to make connections.

(Probably shouldn't be giving away my secrets like that.)
 

Good points raised, Wik. Mind you, even as a rabid 4th Edition enthusiast, I still run my blue dragons in deserts. ;)

Also, when are Rechan and I facing off? Going by the unofficial list, I thought it was going to start today?

Me too, actually. :)

the "blue dragon" thing was one of those that I think 4e sort of screwed up on... along with Myconids and Hydras (I don't like how hydras don't regenerate anymore).
 

I have won many rounds through (or perhaps in spite of) deliberately playing with the meaning of the words.

No judge in my experience has ever dinged me because he had a specific word usage in mind that I failed to meet. Personally, when I see an ingredient like "rogue hydra," expect the judge to look for alternate meanings.

The first thing I do, each and every time I get the ingredient list, is go over the ingredients and look for alternate meanings. If you find alternate meanings for the ingredients, you expand your ingredient list, which makes it easier to make connections.

(Probably shouldn't be giving away my secrets like that.)


One of the things I try to do is use each ingredient twice. That is not always possible but very often when you take a little time to look at the words you can come up with two different ways in which the word might be applied. For instand, when I looked up the word Skerry for the entry wind Skerry, I found that there were three possible definitions. The third, a type of rat, didn't really speak to me, but the image of rocks sticking out of the ocean became, in my mind, rocks floating in the wind. Likewise the idea of a boat sailing between these rocks was a natural transition. Thus I incorporated both of the possible meanings of skerry into the adventure.
 

I have won many rounds through (or perhaps in spite of) deliberately playing with the meaning of the words.

No judge in my experience has ever dinged me because he had a specific word usage in mind that I failed to meet. Personally, when I see an ingredient like "rogue hydra," expect the judge to look for alternate meanings.

The first thing I do, each and every time I get the ingredient list, is go over the ingredients and look for alternate meanings. If you find alternate meanings for the ingredients, you expand your ingredient list, which makes it easier to make connections.

(Probably shouldn't be giving away my secrets like that.)

Yeah, I did that too, for my submission. I seriously considered the idea of my "Dry well" being "dry" in terms of alcohol-free (in a pirate town!). But I liked where I went with it more.

My point earlier though was that in our judge's review of our pieces, he specifically mentioned how he interpreted "rogue hydra" with an example. And I can guarantee it was one I never thought of, and this was entirely due to an edition preference of my own (though I probably would never have thought of it in my 3e years, either).

In any case, it's all academic. I'm looking forward to round two against you, Wulf. Thanks for the trade secrets. ;)
 

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