Alright, ManicFuel's on the first list of alternates.
I should note that I'll be structuring at least the first part of the game around your characters -- so if you have anything specific you'd like to pursue, feel free to mention it.
Voadam:
Your character looks okay, but here's a quick list of errors/formatting problems I ran into:
- I'd prefer if Dex 18 (20) read as Dex 20 (16 base, +2 level, +2 enh)... It's just easier for me to use that way. Also, I tend to prefer the standard order (Str/Dex/Con/Int/Wis/Cha), although looking back at the template I think that was my gaff
- Base melee should be the bonuses you'd have with, say, a club you picked up off of an enemy -- straight BAB + Str. The attack bonuses for the rapier/dagger combo should be in the weapon section.
- Your initiative bonus should be +9, not +6.
- Your cloak of resistance is marked on the equipment section as +2, although it's clear from the price and the bonus you have marked elsewhere that it's since been downgraded to a +1.
Those changes notwithstanding, you can consider the character approved.