Off to War (always recruiting) OCC Year 2:
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HolyMan
Thy wounds are healed!
Not bad for your first attempt I have seen worse. And you will learn all the ways to clean up a post and such as you go.
Only thing crunch wise I see wrong is you have Reflex save listed as:
Reflex 2 + 0 = +2 and it should be
Reflex 0 + 2 = +2
I haven't added up the equipment because it is to late in the evening for math, but I saw you took the trident that is a very irregular weapon and will fit in nicely.
A suggestion should you want it. Maybe to flesh the character out a little and make him a little bit better in combat. You could have in your background that your character didn't handle a sword very well but the "pitch fork like" weapon was well suited to him. And since you didn't do well with regular weapons you were put in with the irregulars.
So if you want I will allow you to lose Prof. with all Martial Weapons and swap it out for Prof. with Trident and any other Prof. you wish.
Suggestions: Shield Specialization, Toughness, Weapon Focus, come to mind. You could start another tree and take Power Attack or Combat Expertise.
Totally up to you but it would add a little fluff and crunch to the character at the same time.
Let me know and I will finish your review tomorrow.
HM
Only thing crunch wise I see wrong is you have Reflex save listed as:
Reflex 2 + 0 = +2 and it should be
Reflex 0 + 2 = +2
I haven't added up the equipment because it is to late in the evening for math, but I saw you took the trident that is a very irregular weapon and will fit in nicely.
A suggestion should you want it. Maybe to flesh the character out a little and make him a little bit better in combat. You could have in your background that your character didn't handle a sword very well but the "pitch fork like" weapon was well suited to him. And since you didn't do well with regular weapons you were put in with the irregulars.
So if you want I will allow you to lose Prof. with all Martial Weapons and swap it out for Prof. with Trident and any other Prof. you wish.
Suggestions: Shield Specialization, Toughness, Weapon Focus, come to mind. You could start another tree and take Power Attack or Combat Expertise.
Totally up to you but it would add a little fluff and crunch to the character at the same time.
Let me know and I will finish your review tomorrow.
HM
Spade
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Oh, I hadn't even considered the pitchfork-trident thing, that's actually a very interesting idea. And yeah, the background is pretty bland, so I'll try to work on that. The sword thing is a good step towards that.
I'll also look at your suggestions closely, and I actually forgot about the swapping thing you allow people to do.
Thanks for being pretty quick on the response.
I'll also look at your suggestions closely, and I actually forgot about the swapping thing you allow people to do.
Thanks for being pretty quick on the response.
it's obviously not finished, but this is the just of how I plan on the character starting out.
[sblock]Chaotic Neutral male Human Lycanthrope (cheetah)
EXP: 0
Srt: 13 +1
Dex: 18 +4
Con: 12 +1
Int: 14 +2
Wis: 8 -1
Car: 12 +1
Size: Medium
Type: Humanoid (Shapechanger).
Age: 16
Height: 5' 6"
Weight: 118 lb
Eyes: Orangish Amber
Hair: Light brown
Skin: Light tan
Total Hit Points: 7
[FONT="]
Armor Class: 14 = 10 + 4 [dexterity]
Touch AC: 14
Flat-footed: 10
Initiative modifier: + 4 = + 4 [dexterity]
Fortitude save: + 1 = 0 [base] + 1 [Constitution]
Reflex save: + 6 = 2 [base] + 4 [dexterity]
Will save: - 1 = 0 [base] - 1 [wisdom]
Attack (handheld): + 1 = 0 [base] + 1 [strength]
Attack (missile): + 4 = 0 [base] + 4 [dexterity]
Grapple check: + 1 = 0 [base] + 1 [strength]
Weapon proficiency: All simple, [/FONT]plus the hand crossbow, rapier, sap, shortbow, and short swor[FONT="]d
Light load: 50 lb. or less
Medium load: 51-100 lb.
Heavy load: 101-150 lb.
Lift over head: - 150 lb.
Lift off ground: - 300 lb.
Push or drag: - 750 lb.
Languages: Common, Sylvan, Giant.
[sblock=Feats]
[sblock=Fleet of foot] the +10' speed one that must be taken at level one, don't know why the same feat name (one that is not even all that generic sounding,) is used for two different feats[/sblock]
Acrobatic (house rule bonus feat)
[sblock=Natural shapeshifter]
Benefit: allows the character to assume the form of a specific animal (cheetah) as a Supernatural ability. It does not assume the ability scores of the animal, but instead adds (One times Animal hit dice)/3 of the animal’s physical ability score modifiers to its own ability scores. A lycanthrope also can assume a bipedal hybrid form with prehensile hands and animalistic features.
Special: replaced by another feat when the character attains Alternate Form[/sblock]
[/sblock][/FONT][/sblock]
[sblock]Chaotic Neutral male Human Lycanthrope (cheetah)
EXP: 0
Srt: 13 +1
Dex: 18 +4
Con: 12 +1
Int: 14 +2
Wis: 8 -1
Car: 12 +1
Size: Medium
Type: Humanoid (Shapechanger).
Age: 16
Height: 5' 6"
Weight: 118 lb
Eyes: Orangish Amber
Hair: Light brown
Skin: Light tan
Total Hit Points: 7
[FONT="]
Armor Class: 14 = 10 + 4 [dexterity]
Touch AC: 14
Flat-footed: 10
Initiative modifier: + 4 = + 4 [dexterity]
Fortitude save: + 1 = 0 [base] + 1 [Constitution]
Reflex save: + 6 = 2 [base] + 4 [dexterity]
Will save: - 1 = 0 [base] - 1 [wisdom]
Attack (handheld): + 1 = 0 [base] + 1 [strength]
Attack (missile): + 4 = 0 [base] + 4 [dexterity]
Grapple check: + 1 = 0 [base] + 1 [strength]
Weapon proficiency: All simple, [/FONT]plus the hand crossbow, rapier, sap, shortbow, and short swor[FONT="]d
Light load: 50 lb. or less
Medium load: 51-100 lb.
Heavy load: 101-150 lb.
Lift over head: - 150 lb.
Lift off ground: - 300 lb.
Push or drag: - 750 lb.
Languages: Common, Sylvan, Giant.
[sblock=Feats]
[sblock=Fleet of foot] the +10' speed one that must be taken at level one, don't know why the same feat name (one that is not even all that generic sounding,) is used for two different feats[/sblock]
Acrobatic (house rule bonus feat)
[sblock=Natural shapeshifter]
Benefit: allows the character to assume the form of a specific animal (cheetah) as a Supernatural ability. It does not assume the ability scores of the animal, but instead adds (One times Animal hit dice)/3 of the animal’s physical ability score modifiers to its own ability scores. A lycanthrope also can assume a bipedal hybrid form with prehensile hands and animalistic features.
Special: replaced by another feat when the character attains Alternate Form[/sblock]
[/sblock][/FONT][/sblock]
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Dragonwriter
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HM, Trinham's question in IC reminded me... You never did get around to listing whatever supplies were set aside for me at Harkon. Might need them now. 
jackslate45
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Why do I get the feeling Ern may die by party mutiny...
Dragonwriter
First Post
Because you're not being up-front and everyone is suspicious of the person who just runs in with zombies chasing them and gets everyone into a fight that nearly kills them?
Anyways, Jareth doesn't really trust you (he trusts all of... 3 or 4 people I can think of, plus the rest of his family), but he's not going to attack you. Unless you give him a reason to attack, like attacking him...
He's more likely to say "we saved you, got you out of the caves... good bye and good luck" once we reach an exit where it's safe for you to leave.
jackslate45
First Post
Because you're not being up-front and everyone is suspicious of the person who just runs in with zombies chasing them and gets everyone into a fight that nearly kills them?
Anyways, Jareth doesn't really trust you (he trusts all of... 3 or 4 people I can think of, plus the rest of his family), but he's not going to attack you. Unless you give him a reason to attack, like attacking him...
He's more likely to say "we saved you, got you out of the caves... good bye and good luck" once we reach an exit where it's safe for you to leave.
Ern needed to learn to not be up-front. Her background kinda forced her to be... Otherwise she be dead.
besides, feeling that the entire party can turn on you in a second is kinda scary, but fun as well...
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