OOC Kingdom of Ashes V - Brood city, baby!

[The_Universe]

I have the time and the location to make this very do-able!

Liz is in, pending group approval. Anybody else?

 

[The_Universe]

Somebody Proofread this for me.

It can't be any longer, but feel free to cut where it needs to be cut (if it needs to be).

Please check grammar, spelling, phrasing, consistency, and clarity of thought.

Thank you so much!

I might even make it worth bonus XP - just about ready to submit this puppy to Dungeon....want to make sure it's clean before it goes.

 

[Archon]

"They were seperated at birth..."

i too can be part of thhis side game.and ooc, i think giving up the child would be cool and a big bargaining chip, ic Archon would flip out.
my input.
peice,
mik

 

[Xath]

Liz is in, pending group approval. Anybody else?

I'm finished with all of my major projects for the semester, so barring finals...I have no life.

 

[Xath]

I think directly giving up a child is a decision that has to be made by Archon and Jaine. And I don't think either would agree. Jaine's willing to give herself up, but her children? And Archon would definitely go berserk.

 

[The_Universe]

i too can be part of thhis side game.and ooc, i think giving up the child would be cool and a big bargaining chip, ic Archon would flip out.
my input.
peice,
mik

Which would be less IC flip outtage? Giving up one of the twins entirely, or having Jaine marry AB with one of the twins being a secret?

 

[Queen_Dopplepopolis]

Which would be less IC flip outtage? Giving up one of the twins entirely, or having Jaine marry AB with one of the twins being a secret?

Giving him the kid is not an offer that will entice him, though. As I said earlier, he has Archonus Bluestar to serve as his living heir... or, if Big Blue decides that AB isn't enough, his line is still continuing to this day.

So, finding one on his own accord isn't impossible. In fact, I bet it'd be pretty easy. And, finally, if he really wanted to, he could Transfer Birth into his woman and have a bouncing baby that way... it wouldn't be *his,* but it would be *theirs.*

The thing that makes the AB/Jaine marriage appealing to the Bluestar is, most likely, the tying of the lines.

 

[Laurel]

Yea the ability to reach my computer finally!

Giving him the kid is not an offer that will entice him, though. As I said earlier, he has Archonus Bluestar to serve as his living heir... or, if Big Blue decides that AB isn't enough, his line is still continuing to this day.

So, finding one on his own accord isn't impossible. In fact, I bet it'd be pretty easy. And, finally, if he really wanted to, he could Transfer Birth into his woman and have a bouncing baby that way... it wouldn't be *his,* but it would be *theirs.*

The thing that makes the AB/Jaine marriage appealing to the Bluestar is, most likely, the tying of the lines.

The lines are already tied. There are already two children.

IC Jaine and AA may flip, but if Jaine and AB are getting married essential they are just putting at least one child up to the same deal. Once they are gone however soon that may be.

So far as I know transfer birth is something we came up with, and only we know about.

About the 'his line is still continuing to this day,' yes, it is and by offering him a partial deal with the kid he gets hands on dealings with it. Making sure we aren't raising the kid to hate him and in the future go after and try to kill him. A way to have to look over his shoulder all the time.

But anyways.....

 

[Laurel]

By Jaine marrying AB, the Bluestar get control over Jaine. If Jaine falls in love with AB (very likely) and he for her, the bluestar has a huge barganing chip with the rulers of our kingdom. AB still under oath and all, his children inherit as well, ol' blue will know this. Of what we could offer him this is the most extreme and the best from his vantage.

By offering joint custody of one child- no he doesn't get the greatest, but it also clearly states what the joint custody is. Both sides get something here..... It is an intermetiate before offering our queen (and thus country) tied and bound to him.

Yes she may be offering herself up for country and all, but as she is queen and ruler what she binds herself to she binds the rulership, heirs, and future of the kingdom to as well.

With all these dealing we should not just throw the most extreme deal on the table... we are barganing. Just like we get 60% of cost for rings, the purchaser doesn't start by saying they will pay full price and the seller doesn't start by agreeing to the first bid the purchaser offers.

 

[Queen_Dopplepopolis]

The lines are already tied. There are already two children.

DNA isn't as important as marriage is in a world like this, though... you have to keep that in mind. A formal marriage ties the lines more than simply two children ever could.