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Shalimar, could you let me know if anything in this story fragment would be out of character for Stella...

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A few weeks after the destruction of Alderaan ...

This isn't working. Darryn thought, some time after his fifth or sixth drink of the evening. The girl he was with was even more expensive than the alcohol, but neither had been as diverting as he'd hoped. You just don't have the right personality for a drunken playboy, Dr. Leqarna. And you know too much biochemistry to try drowning your sorrows in anything stronger than alcohol.

He was in a spaceport cantina that the idle rich favored, on the sort of world that the idle rich went to when they were looking for trouble. It had seemed approriate. What else was he going to do?

"You're better than this, Darryn." Someone said. Who was it? That engineer he'd hired two worlds back, when Marcus -- who'd taken care of Darryn's starship and otherwise worked for him all through medical school, and his residency, and was probably the best friend he'd had -- had quit? What was her name? Stella something-or-other? She'd needed to get off-world, and he wasn't being picky at the time. She was running from something, he'd picked up that much.

"You've known me less than a month." He said.

"And despite spending most of that time wandering from one direputable spaceport cantina to the next, you've still managed to save half a dozen people's lives in that time." She said.

"I don't know why I bothered. It's pointless, anyway. If the Empire can blow up Alderaan, they could do the same anywhere else, for any reason." He was ignoring his escort, but she didn't seem all that concerned.

"You didn't come down here to walk me home." He finished.

"No. There's an urgent priority message for you, and you weren't answering your commlink."

"It's probably more lawyers." Darryn said. When he wasn't burrying himself in alcohol, he'd spent too much time talking to lawyers lately. Usually informing him that another group of relatives had been confirmed dead, and that he was heir to at least some part of their estate. These things happened when you were one of a handful of Alderaan nobility who had been off-world when the Empire decided to make a statement with its new terror weapon. By the time they were through, he wasn't just going to be rich, he was going to be exorbiantly wealthy.

"I don't think so. This was sent on the highest priority you've got, and encrypted."

"I suppose I have to get back to my ship." He told his escort.

When he got back to the trasport, he took a couple of pills to clear his head before opening his mail. He'd left his wrist computer on the ship; it was handy for normal business, but not for fun.

"Use the special family code." He told the computer, when the standard decryption program returned gibberish other than a short header that let him know who the message actually was from. Prompted for a passphrase, he typed it out. Surprising the things he still remembered. A holorecording started to play in response.

"You may not remember me." A man about Darryn's age said. One that looked a lot like him, actually, except for the unfamiliar uniform. It wasn't surprsing; Arrik was Darryn's second cousin, and as far as Darryn had known, Arrik had disappeared without a trace two years ago. Or rather with very little trace; his parents had recieved a few untraceable messages a year that let them know he was still alive, but not much more than that. "By now, you've head about what happened to Alderaan. If you want to do something about it, keep listening, otherwise destroy this message right away. I'll give you a minute..."

He thought about shutting off the recording. Arrik was certainly hinting that he was part of the Rebel Alliance. Which Darryn had always considered well-intentioned but doomed. But he didn't stop it. And his cousin gave him a contact point, and told him the Rebellion could always use doctors, but he thought someone who was smart, observant, got on well with people, and had more than a little quite legitimately acquired money might be able to do more than that.

And then Darryn realized Stella had heard the whole thing. Those pills he'd taken did a lot to clear your head after too much alcohol, but they didn't completely reverse the effect.

"If you have any intention of calling Imperial Security, could you do it now?" He said.

"I don't." She said.
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Considering Stella has at least 3 personalities that were jammed together, it wouldn't be much of an issue if it was out of character. Its good as is, though Stella would probably take that moment to tell the doctor what she is.

The risk would be too great of the Rebels eventually finding out what she was, and then assuming she'd been tasked to infiltrate the alliance given that that was what they built the HRDs to do. By at least having him know what she is going in, it could side step that issue. The fact that he is already incredibly rich would help to allay the risk of him tryingto sell her for profit. Plus it gives a good roleplaying angle of him examining her and how her biological functions work given that HRDs appear to be fully human and biological except for their bones registering as unknown.

If you'd rather that he not know though, thats fine too, she'd just keep it to herself instead.
 


Continuation of Background:
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"If you have any intention of calling Imperial Security, could you do it now?" He said.

"I don't." She said. The white haired girl looked rather hesitant for a moment, as if she weren't sure of what she was about to say, then she shrugged, her hands at her sides balled up into fists out of nerves or perhaps uncertainty.

"Imperial Security are the last people I'd ever want to do any favors. I know your smart enough to see I was running away from someone, and they're it. You have no worries from me if you want to join the Rebel Alliance." she said, looking tense at her admission.

"Why are you running from them, if I may ask?" the doctor asked.

"They made me, wanted to use me to help them hunt down people like your cousin. Not that I have any problem with hunting criminals or anything, but they did things to me I didn't like. I decided that they were the bad guys, and I left. They are very angry with me I think."

"When you say they made you...?"

"I was being precise, they did make me. I am a droid, a Human Replica Droid. I'm designed to be pretty much indistinguishable from human, I believe they intend to eventually branch out into other species, but for now it's only humans. They wanted to keep me as a proto-type unit so that they didn't have to start from scratch every time they wanted a new one like they had to do with me. They experimented on me, wiping my memory away every few days, giving me different personalities. It was horrible, some days I was this programmed assassin, sometimes I was spy, but a lot of the time they kept me as a human child who thought one of the scientists was her father. The file suggested juvenile females are easy to keep calm, and eager to please their fathers'." Stella said, her eyes trained unblinkingly on the doctor for any sign of his inner thoughts.
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I don't have enough of a sense of the Doctor to see how he would react to a human teenager stating that she is a droid who has been designed to be indistinguishable from human. There are several reactions I can think of that would range from shooting her with a blaster set to stun to see if she is being serious, to believing her, to calling up an asylum for an obviously troubled girl.
 

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"You're lucky I'm a surgeon, not a medical researcher or a psychiatrist." He said.

"Why's that?"

"Because I'm pretty sure you believe what you're telling me." I wouldn't have trusted my observations half an hour ago, but there's a reason why I keep those pills around. "A more research-oriented physician would probably want to figure out how you worked, once he convinced himself you weren't human or just some unfamiliar near-human species. A shrink would be trying to figure out your mind, and probably pretty well convinced you were deluding yourself. But a surgeon would just want to know what he's patching up, if he ever has to do that. And I can take a look at you tomorrow. For now, could you set a course for that rendevous point Arrik gave me?"
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And ENworld is back again...

Galphanore, drothgery – was there any interest in following some of the joint background I'd outlined in post #141? It'd unite galphanore's mercenary to Blackrat's pilot and my astromech with a common background while also tying us to drothgery's doctor and, through him, the rebel alliance. Shalimar's HRD in turn could already share a background with the good doctor.
 




Um... Rebellion Era Guide came out yesterday and I'm getting it today... If I find something cool, do I still have time to make quick revision? :angel:
 

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